Brothers Gone

Brothers Gone

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
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Another Momzilla Nursery rhyme:)

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__Brothers Gone__

 

 

Are you sleeping?
Are you creeping?
Brother John,
aren’t you gone?
Morning bells are ringing.
Mourning bells are singing.
Ding, dong, ding.
Ding, gone, ding.

 

Are you weeping?

That you peeping?

Brother John,

Can’t move on!

Scorning yells are stinging

Warning tells your clinging

Ding, dong, ding.

Wing, John, wing.

© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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I'm fuzzy about remembering nursery rhymes, so I love it when someone uses a very recognizable ditty like this -- your rhyme & rhythm are spot-on to mimic the original. I like the way your intensity ramps up from mild to frenzied (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

I am so enjoying doing these it tickles my inner Poe
barleygirl

4 Days Ago

I knew you were a freak dressing up as a dandy . . .



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who is this Monzilla nursery rhyme person everyone is writing about?

Posted 2 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Days Ago

MomzillaNC she is in the cafe
Ok Rob, I like this bit of rhyme, rather straightforward for you, and you've gone all out Canadian on me...which I like. Frere Jacques is a Quebecois song for children so it fit the nursery rhyme mold...and then you finished the rhyme with the name of a very good Canadian stand-up comic...John Wing.
From the bottom of my oh so Canadian heart I say well done and thank you.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

Hi Ted:) go Canada! My favorite comedian was John Candy but I also love Red Green:)
Ted Kniffen

4 Days Ago

Both good talents. Also promotes duct tape...the handyman's friend.
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

I have a collection of duct tapes of many various colors and widths for every occasion
I'm fuzzy about remembering nursery rhymes, so I love it when someone uses a very recognizable ditty like this -- your rhyme & rhythm are spot-on to mimic the original. I like the way your intensity ramps up from mild to frenzied (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

I am so enjoying doing these it tickles my inner Poe
barleygirl

4 Days Ago

I knew you were a freak dressing up as a dandy . . .
Frère Jacques/Brother John dressed up in a scary Halloween mask with the threat writ large in the hearts of those so touched by such legends.

Posted 4 Days Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Days Ago

Hi John:) Out of all the Nursery rhymes... I always thought this one was the most creepy sounding. b.. read more

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Added on September 11, 2019
Last Updated on September 11, 2019
Tags: bells, death, ghost, clinging, haunting, moving on, sadness, weeping

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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