Eyewitness

Eyewitness

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

Eyewitness

 

An immaterial witness

whispers intuition

of inspires conceptions mistress

resplendent fruition.

 

Eye touched her art felt impressions

timeless embrace to heart

peering naked in-tranced-gressions

reframing our imparts.




© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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What i see and what we see, it's a dance and often times much more positive in the eyes of the we as we want to see the good in the other and not so much in ourself. Not sure if I got this one completely or not, it did make me feel a bit squishy. You're writing as always was fantastic....

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

so true, good sir, brother Crowley:) but a great poem sometimes makes us look in the mirror and spar.. read more



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We are our own witness, the 'I', but how can we be judge, jury and executioner!? Then of course there needs to be another 'eye'...

'in-tranced-gressions'
so clever!

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


You have such a way with words. The word play is very clever and illuminating.
"timeless embrace to heart
peering naked in-tranced-gressions
reframing our imparts."

Wonderful:)


Posted 2 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

2 Weeks Ago

Hello pryde I love your name by the way speaking of way with words:) thank you for the compliment an.. read more
Truthful I must say, this is so very good and very well written

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

thank you Kesch so are you on both counts:)
WOW, this one is so true for every poet. We splash our words on the page and we are out own worst critics. We never think our writing is as good or meaningful as the next poet's. Then someone leaves a review about how your words made them feel....and suddenly you realize you ARE that good....and your words matter. Great write, Robert. Lydi**

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

the fun part of this is what happened in slow motion back in the day... the only interface occurred .. read more
Lydia

3 Weeks Ago

To me as well!
I wasn't entirely sure of your meaning here Bunny, but I experienced a feeling while reading your lines. Whether it is poetry, a painting or a photograph my eyes and heart connect with another artist. Sometimes that connection can be deep. We can reach out and embrace others with our art.

Chris

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

well that is it indeed i just added the element that once you experience the connection to others ar.. read more
Art of any sort should take us on inner journeys and this look at what embracing it means brings me to a state of re-framing my previous transgressions and peering again into its mirrored yet hidden treasures. Many thanks Robbie for laying it out on a fairly clear line for the likes of me........... Fay

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

I have a repeat set of thoughts that seem to progress in my mind one of them is the witness process .. read more
You left me bewildered with this.
Even though this is not your first piece that makes me feel this. You're always speaking the truth that has to be known through your writings and this in particular has made me to realize another reality.

Well penned, Robert.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

Wow Kay that to me is a treasure beyond all that I could aspire my friend thank you
Your presentations have a habit of leaving me rattled - but in a good way. I'm utterly impressed by your wordsmith-ing, every time. I'm thinking perhaps you're just too cool for words!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

thanks Kelly don't feel bad your feet always have the same effect:) and then I read you and kaboom b.. read more
What i see and what we see, it's a dance and often times much more positive in the eyes of the we as we want to see the good in the other and not so much in ourself. Not sure if I got this one completely or not, it did make me feel a bit squishy. You're writing as always was fantastic....

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

so true, good sir, brother Crowley:) but a great poem sometimes makes us look in the mirror and spar.. read more

You will be fine mate but we would like to keep you in a while longer just for observations..

A seriously clever juggle of words that are gonna play havoc with my retina's the more I stare at and admire em...

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Neville

3 Weeks Ago

I know what you mean Robert.. Its an experience.. that you describe.. and as such we can't let go of.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

yes:) now why did i have to go and write a poem about this when i could of just asked you:) LOL
Neville

3 Weeks Ago

you gave me the answer tho.. look deeper within :)

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Added on September 21, 2019
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Tags: witness, reflection, art, comprise, direction, understanding, empathy, feeling, interpretations, changing, perspective

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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Hello My Name is Robert Trakofler My nickname is Bad Bunny... I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zeni.. more..

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