Mrudula's Moon or The Letter L

Mrudula's Moon or The Letter L

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

Mrudula's Moon Or The Letter L


Luminous lunar lamp

lulling

Lament locations loss

lapsing

Lustrous librate lodestar

luring

languid lantern longing

lovers

languishing limitless

locale

linked lustful looking

locked

lest long location leaves

lost love

losses lingering low  

lurching

lunatic lamplight lead

lurid

laughter locks life’s luster

lavish  

lucidity laugh lines



© 2019 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


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You and Mrudula are definitely kindred spirits in writing. Isn’t that a wonderful thing about sharing poetry with other poets? Discovering that there are others that understand the music of your heart is like a gift.

I love that the whole poem is written with words that begin with only one letter. And that the theme is love and the moon’s place between lovers. Mrudula does paint such warm pictures of love. Sometimes I find myself believing in love as an eternal and expanding force between two people when I visit her page. She opens out the world of love.

I love the way your poem honors her, but then also shows us your way of seeing the world through that lens. Two generous spirits. The alliteration is like a song beat out with clicking tongue to hypnotize the listener. This is a wonderful tribute/building on another’s idea.



Posted 4 Weeks Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

4 Weeks Ago

She is all about love indeed and she has eyes that look right into your heart not in invasive way bu.. read more



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And I would guess you wrote this in a "L" shaped room?! I must visit Mrudula's site and see what the "L" this is all about.

By the way . . . love the photo . . . makes you look extra bad! All the best.
T

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks Kentuck it’s rectangular but the entrance to the staircase makes a mini L:)
Inspiration materialized as art. Each word is masterful brush stroke. How you not only found this many "L" words to fit into one poem (to the exclusion of all others), but how you arranged them with such a smooth flow is beyond my comprehension. I must admit I had to read it three times, but each reading brought a deeper connection, like standing before a grand painting for an hour, finding something special in each minute's reflection. You have a special brand found only here, sir. Incredible work.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

somehow or another these ones come out of my head. I haven't a clue what sparks them they just sort .. read more
Lots of ls and veruy interesting poem. It was unqiue.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

coming from you Im gonna take that as quite the compliment my friend:)
JungLee

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you very much
Laughter locks life's lustre ' my fav line in this super cool alliterative poem I found very enjoyable to read. And I admire the luminous lunar lamp how you said that creatively as well. Kudos for a fantastic one!

Nice to read from you again....plz pleez do review/ comment/ write your thoughts under my newest poem.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

Hey hey Zaynab:) nice to see you! Thanks for the read I will check it out:)
Laugh lines are lovely. I heard lilting laughter as I looked and leered between the lines. Surely lads and ladies will like this one. Seriously, this is very romantic and I smiled reading that last line. Those without laugh lines have not lived, have they? Lydi**

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

I have lines in my lines LOL:)
Lydia

3 Weeks Ago

And every morning, the mirror shows a few more....I can relate! :)
" Laughter locks life's luster,... " I truly believe that laughter is one of the sweetest expressions of life. And some have the most joyful hearts their beaming faces brighten the surroundings, you are one of those irresistible people. You gathered the luster of moon and laughter of loving heart and fastened a lavalliere of a poem to luxuriate, Robert. Thank you very much. Tudo de bom para te.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks Mrudula... you made me think a lot about the moon:) você sorri raios de lua também
Mrudula Rani

2 Weeks Ago

Muito obrigada.
All of your glowing reviews here say everything I'm thinking about this too. I'm really happy for you, to be in sync with another admired poet at the cafe like Mrudula. Also your way of using alliteration without overblowing it is amazing (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

He he...I didn’t? LoL:) Thanks Margie I got lifted, lugged let loose & the litany leaped into a .. read more
Love lasts long; luminosity lingers, longing. Lovely!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Linda love your lines too:)

I just wanna reinforce absolutely everything Eilis just said about the pair of ya... and what's more, I simply love L's :) Neville

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

that's cause you got two of them in your name:) LOL thanks Nev:)
Neville

3 Weeks Ago

pleasure and a half to be sure...
I don't think there are many who could string such comprehensive alliteration together in any meaningful form and yet you manage to convey a core message and honour a fellow poet!

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Weeks Ago

I honestly don't know how I do it LOL it just happens I will be thinking about something and a flood.. read more

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Tags: Luna, love, lunatic, lust, satellite, beacon, distance, near, far, L, languish, linger, lick, lamp, lumin

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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