SOLicit

SOLicit

A Poem by Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

__SOLicit__

 

 

Oh For the briefest of moments

When the dusk light consents to my view

Touching craves deepest components

To paint my world in sumptuous hues

 

Soon will be weeping lone poet

In the darkness I’ll walk without you

Tears will be sweeping atonement

In hopes that I merit gaze renew

 

And for the briefest of moments

As your dawns light does grace life anew

Bathing the bleakness of lonely

To bask in her warm lustrous review

 

My passages seeking unfocused

As the days gaze sets burning purview

Plods set to Fleeting my onus

Till the dusk sets to dawn my heart true



© 2020 Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)


Author's Note

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Okay after all it is Valentines week so once again I will attempt feebly to paint Romance and love...here goes:)

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Robert, this poem proves we all have a romantic capacity. :) I think it’s incredibly difficult to write on any topic we don’t feel at the moment. So, I get the references, and applaud the effort. I think you could write a good poem on any subject. The image speaks its own poetry, and so fitting here.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

it kind of dawned on me that for me love is like the sun I can't really look at it but for perhaps a.. read more



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A love poem for the sun and why not. I certainly like basking in his glory and I am totally mesmerised by watching sunrises, sunsets and sun beams dancing on water. So uplifting for the spirits and today we have a glimpse of his beaming face after the deluge of rainfall and devastating floods. Very nicely penned Bunny.

Chris

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

I am glad to hear you have seen the end of the worst of the storms and flooding dear Chris I was gon.. read more
Christine Anne Shaw

3 Months Ago

Oh my goodness, sink holes. What next? It has been devastating over here in some areas. Still not ou.. read more
I can write love letters to the sun and stars all day. It’s the human connections where I struggle, haha. To a certain degree, I think love poetry comes from a place of blindness. Temporary blindness to the reality of human connection. That doesn’t sound cynical at all, oh dear.

I thought this was beautiful. It made me think of a kind of sun worship. Bowing at the feet of beauty, in a sense, and hoping always to have the opportunity to be in its presence again.

What we’d all like, I believe. Connections like that are unbreakable because they live within us and are dependent only on our own awareness and determination to be deeply present.

So, for me, where this poem takes the idea of love is wonderful. Loving what gives and sustains life and not merely on the utilitarian level, but in a deeper, more poetic sense of things. The poet feels and then attempts to translate the feeling. Hoping to inspire the same sense in others. I think you were quite successful here. I do feel inspired after reading.



Posted 3 Months Ago


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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

Eilis you just simply amaze me If I had just half of your ability to see things I should call myself.. read more
Eilis

3 Months Ago

You’re welcome, BB. And thank you
Your poem is beautiful Robert “to bask in her warm lustrous view, the imagery is fabulous, very artistically poetically fabulous. Great work

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

Hi Katrina:) nice to meet you... thanks for such a glowing review
Katrina Mckeown

3 Months Ago

You are most welcome and very deserving I might add..was a joy to read indeed. :)
dearest Bunny... your poem is a Prayer...
where Buttermilk skies have Sunset colors of
Rose and Lavender... exactly what I saw this evening.
Nature is our truest friend... always appearing with
moods galore... to open another door. truly a beautiful
poem with the touch of a Master's artful brush. truly, Pat

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

Hi patricia, I do tend to solicit the light which is the very definition of a prayer:) light, love .. read more
Love is the way to see, to feel warmth and to feel int he best company one could ever choose. And.. so is that sun, that glorious Sol that makes waking up a pleasure and going to sleep the finest procurer of dreams! This really is a glorious write, Bunny Robert, and is perhaps best appreciated after the colourful hearts and flowers. Thank you for 'feebly painting Romance and love' - so tenderly!

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

Dear Emmy some things are so beautiful you can't look at them but you can feel them:)
emmajoy

3 Months Ago

Yes, I remember.
Robert, this poem proves we all have a romantic capacity. :) I think it’s incredibly difficult to write on any topic we don’t feel at the moment. So, I get the references, and applaud the effort. I think you could write a good poem on any subject. The image speaks its own poetry, and so fitting here.

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

it kind of dawned on me that for me love is like the sun I can't really look at it but for perhaps a.. read more
Beautiful again . This somewhat reminds me of Shakespeare's 'Shall i compare thee to a summer's day?'.
Dear Robert, your attempt might have been feeble but the outcome is exquisite as always.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

Thankful for that compliment Ayesha that made my day:) I always feel a lacking in the expression of .. read more
Being alone can't be a lot of fun, I don't suppose.
Fortunately, I have a wonderful wife who fills everyday with joy.
Don't you just hate it when your onus gets fleeced by those darned Plods? I do.

Posted 3 Months Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

The plods are the enemy:) LOL I’m never really alone just plodding most often
M.E.Lyle

3 Months Ago

They are, aren't they?
Seriously though, I thought it was a great piece of work. Oh, if only.. read more
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

Wow thanks I generally hate everything I write within 24 hours so I’m on the fence
I didn't realize that a bunny could get so mushy

Posted 3 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

I'm sorry Dave i promise not to do it again it's those f*****g cupids their like little winged rats,.. read more
Dave Brown

3 Months Ago

'Stupid Cupid, stop pickin on me!'
mushy mush mush … i bought a box of chocolates for a lady friend once
end of story!
being alone isn't always lonely … i don't believe my true love, art, would be the same were i partnered up
and besides, i have yet to meet the one i want to make miserable for the rest of her life! HA!
i must admit being the oldest of 14 may have something to do with my chosen bachelorhood and then there is my art … she did take my life, my love, my attention!
so YEAH! for love sick blues!

p.s. it is a very good poetic write with a swath of visuals BAD BUNNY!


Posted 3 Months Ago


Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

3 Months Ago

lol the bunny does get mushy sometimes (rarely) but this damn holiday always makes me try to write l.. read more

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Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)
Robert Trakofler (Bad Bunny)

pittsburgh, PA



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I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny Hello I’m Robert I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zenith It is also an antique store and a veget.. more..

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