Let it Rain

Let it Rain

A Poem by Robert Trakofler
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This song just got published (released) in Europe I thoroughly enjoyed working on this with Constant Goddard of whom wrote the music he is a true maestro:)

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Let It Rain

 

Stroll this sphere

Of souls

Strides unclear

-ly shown

strain and fear

Take toll

Atmosphere

Gets cold

Scattered tears

Take hold

Stealing years

Untold

 

But

 

I…

 Can see

The art

Run free

cry …

the plea’s

of hearts

decree

spy…

the scenes

impart

of dreams

fly

set free

rain art

on me

 

let it

 

rain

© 2019 Robert Trakofler

© 2020 Robert Trakofler


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Author's Note

Robert Trakofler
https://open.spotify.com/artist/4Lfqvnzd6MN7hmHJt6LfcY

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dearest Robert... the ground needs moisture to grow in
Mother Natures Womb to be prepared to appear in Spring
with blossoms of blue eyes and sweet smiles... little ears
to hear the music of the birds and a mouth to partake of
Mother's milk. The Art of Rembrandt has touched my heart.
Blessings to you... be well and safe. gently, Pat


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

1 Month Ago

Good morning Patria:) I hope the song made you smile a little!
Patricia Wedel

1 Month Ago

dear Robert... I am sitting in a big overstuffed Chair by our Sleigh Bed. Roger is still sleeping, .. read more



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Gee
Tis a beautifully put together piece Robert. Well done to both :))
Hope you are well and enjoying this festive season

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks Gee! I am sitting in front of my keyboard wearing two layers of clothes my furnace just broke.. read more
Gee

3 Weeks Ago

Never rains, Robert, never rains ...
Look forward to your frozen offerings :)
Take car.. read more
every beat danced in my head , i closed my eyes and yours words here ... they portrayed a very vivid and honest picture of the world we live in .. outstanding poetry , sir .. hope you are safe and doing amazing .. take care :)

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


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Robert Trakofler

3 Weeks Ago

Thank you Ankita I hope it rains art on you:)
Oo, so cool. Can I get your autograph:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


Robert Trakofler

1 Month Ago

LOL for you anything dear Cherrie
Hand on heart, ear Bunny, I sat h olding my breath the first time i heard your song.. .. Second time, I cried.. still am . .

Your words, the music, the sum total ~ is Heartfekt Beautiful.

WE are meant to cry.. RAIN is meant to fall... never mind the scientific reasons... purity is part of selves and the All Around. They bring, give and leave a washing away of debris we carry in our being.

Thank you, dear poet and very true gentleman.

( I read Michael's poem as suggest, is wonderful )

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

1 Month Ago

thanks Emmy:) I really pushed this song to get released because I felt the message was a particularl.. read more
Wow I’m speechless .excellent work, great reciting excellent music production. Robert , the true artist.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

1 Month Ago

Thanks Andrew!!!! Constant is the true Maestro I was just riding his musical wave:) he writes music .. read more
"set free
rain art
on me
let it
rain"
Ahhhh-cleansed, inspired, renewed!! RBB, your wonderfully electric poem reminds me of a Who song sung by Roger Daltry.. Great musicality, form, rhyme, cadence, dramatic pauses- all made me feel like standing in the torrents with upturned face. Raindrops washing away all the effluvia and white noise. Yes. Loved this my friend!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

1 Month Ago

Thanks Annette:) I really enjoyed working on this one
Truly the most amazing thing you've come up with, to date! Wow! This is a great song! For you to sing your verses makes all the difference, compared to your verbal poetry readings. This way of doing it really shows off your voice. I'm always surprised at how slowly you recite/sing your poetry . . . much different than how I might read it in my jackrabbit way . . . listening slows me down & makes me focus on every few words, the way you sing it (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

barleygirl

1 Month Ago

German is not a very poetic language. The words are so long, it would take you 2 minutes to sing one.. read more
Robert Trakofler

1 Month Ago

just in case you were wondering what the lyrics would sound like...
Lass es regnen
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barleygirl

1 Month Ago

DARN this app! (driving us all nuts lately!)


Simply beautiful in all respects ..... I wanna copy .......................................................... Brother Nev :)


Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

1 Month Ago

it has a soothe to it... some people tell me it sounds sad but it really isn't supposed to be sad
Neville

1 Month Ago


.......................... it it truly splendiferous ......
Let it rain... just let the damn burst and the heaviness flow free ... then the light can get in :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

1 Month Ago

I know one person of whom the art rains upon all the time:) Those encaustic pieces are lovely that y.. read more
Stella Armour

1 Month Ago

aww, thank you Bunny :)
I am so reminded of Eric Clapton's "Let it rain"
that way the tears mix with the rain and no one can see us crying. Art has to run free, it cannot be muzzled or muffled, it will scuffle...
if held down.
It has to run free...has to.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

1 Month Ago

after having finished this song I looked up my song on google to find it on spotify only to be shock.. read more

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Added on December 2, 2020
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Tags: Robert Trakofler, Lyrics, Let it Rain, Aloboi, Constant Goddard

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Robert Trakofler
Robert Trakofler

pittsburgh, PA



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I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny Hello I’m Robert I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zenith It is also an antique store and a veget.. more..

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