Let it Rain

Let it Rain

A Poem by Robert Trakofler
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This song just got published (released) in Europe I thoroughly enjoyed working on this with Constant Goddard of whom wrote the music he is a true maestro:)

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Let It Rain

 

Stroll this sphere

Of souls

Strides unclear

-ly shown

strain and fear

Take toll

Atmosphere

Gets cold

Scattered tears

Take hold

Stealing years

Untold

 

But

 

I…

 Can see

The art

Run free

cry …

the plea’s

of hearts

decree

spy…

the scenes

impart

of dreams

fly

set free

rain art

on me

 

let it

 

rain

© 2019 Robert Trakofler

© 2020 Robert Trakofler


Author's Note

Robert Trakofler
https://open.spotify.com/artist/4Lfqvnzd6MN7hmHJt6LfcY

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dearest Robert... the ground needs moisture to grow in
Mother Natures Womb to be prepared to appear in Spring
with blossoms of blue eyes and sweet smiles... little ears
to hear the music of the birds and a mouth to partake of
Mother's milk. The Art of Rembrandt has touched my heart.
Blessings to you... be well and safe. gently, Pat


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

Good morning Patria:) I hope the song made you smile a little!
Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dear Robert... I am sitting in a big overstuffed Chair by our Sleigh Bed. Roger is still sleeping, .. read more



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Very nice, Bunny. A haunting piece; sounded more jazz than rock to me. The sense I get of the lyrics is that regardless of the dreariness of the atmosphere, art is always an antidote.

Posted 2 Months Ago


Wow to ask art to rain is a very cool super idea indeed! At first I thought this was just about the rain. It begins soulfully comparing rain to tears as well. Kudos for this sublime intrigue!
Cheers!!

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

Hi Zaynab:) I hope this song rained some art on you too! This song is a nice reminder that even the .. read more
beautiful union of poetry and music .. love the slow melancholy movement .. simple chord changes and lines ... emotes the mood in me .. but i especially like all the wisdom in the closing ... let it rain .. let it wash over me ... so in that acceptance i feel the joy and comfort of letting go ... i have been reading a lot of dark poems here this morning ... and i think on the note of this one ... i will bid the Cafe' adieu until another morning .. love on ya Bad One .. wonderful production .. good fortune as it is released :)
E.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

That is exactly why I wanted to share this song (now that it has been released I can do it without c.. read more
Einstein Noodle

2 Months Ago

well ...i love it! :)
the one thing you can't take away from rain is its wonderful cleansing effect
But I only like it in the middle of the summer when it is a relief to the steam heat all round

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

well for you I will call it let it Mild with a chance of clear skies:/ LOL
Dave Brown

2 Months Ago

. 😎
How funny there I wrote for rain and here it is
But this rain is much needed, we need it badly, to erase the pain,to even the sorrow, to overcome the fear. Take care.

Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

took the words right out of my mouth I hope you liked the song:)
Dreamer Sima

2 Months Ago

Very very much. Thank you soooo much for sharing this..
dearest Robert... the ground needs moisture to grow in
Mother Natures Womb to be prepared to appear in Spring
with blossoms of blue eyes and sweet smiles... little ears
to hear the music of the birds and a mouth to partake of
Mother's milk. The Art of Rembrandt has touched my heart.
Blessings to you... be well and safe. gently, Pat


Posted 2 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Robert Trakofler

2 Months Ago

Good morning Patria:) I hope the song made you smile a little!
Patricia Wedel

2 Months Ago

dear Robert... I am sitting in a big overstuffed Chair by our Sleigh Bed. Roger is still sleeping, .. read more

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Added on December 2, 2020
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Tags: Robert Trakofler, Lyrics, Let it Rain, Aloboi, Constant Goddard

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Robert Trakofler
Robert Trakofler

pittsburgh, PA



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I am the Bunny but the bunny isn't me long live the bunny Hello I’m Robert I own an art gallery and performance space in Pittsburgh called The Zenith It is also an antique store and a veget.. more..

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