Sing, Bird...Sing

Sing, Bird...Sing

A Poem by ʝ ἶ l l

A bird with a golden wing

Had one wish....

Because she couldn't sing

 

Again she tried

But her song died

 

The bird with a golden wing

Had one wish

She wants to sing

 

A new morning

Another try

Little bird

Don't be shy!

 

Sing, bird....sing

Show your golden wing

 

That little bird in a tree

Had one wish...

She wanted to be free

© 2013 ʝ ἶ l l


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ʝ ἶ l l
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beautifully written

Posted 6 Years Ago


Very beautiful. :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Oh wow this poem was wonderful. I loved how you described the golden wings of the bird and the dream to achieve. Keep working towards your dreams, and never give up on your self.

~Your friend Res.

Posted 6 Years Ago


The need for freedom is universal for man and nature. No voice is as beautiful as the voice that fills the air without fetters or chains.

Posted 6 Years Ago


I love it! The beautifully simplistic style that you have used makes this a joy to read. I believe there's a singing bird in us all just waiting to get out.
Brilliant! Thank you.

Posted 6 Years Ago


good piece, really liked the metaphor here, it has quite a good and positive message, it really is hopeful.

Posted 6 Years Ago


how cute! reminded me of Dory from Finding Nemo, "just keep swimming, just keep swimming..." don't stop trying to accomplish your dreams. great write :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


I thought it was wonderful!!!
the point is clear, and flutters along, your choice of stanzas work pleasantly as well

Posted 6 Years Ago



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ʝ ἶ l l
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I'm a 24 year old poem writer and I love to read poems. I accept your read requests. My birthday is on June.27 English is not my first language. I hope you like my poems. Poems are emotions from th.. more..


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