Red Wine

...an exceptional discovery right in front of my eyes...

Life has brought me another muse
But unlike the other regrettable two
I find a peace in my soul and in my heart
With you I'm willing to make a fresh start

There is no sense of obsessive compulsion
Each moment is authentic and captures myriad emotions
I have no desire to rush towards a finishing line
You are to be savored like a rare red wine

No fear of enmeshment or lack of trust
We are both investing and creating a bond free from lust
Chemistry is there without a doubt
Yet so much more is what this is about

Our first kiss will be magical this much I know
Though it's our conversations and enjoying watching each other grow
That is filling my heart with the purest divine love
While our angels are blessing us with smiles from above

Reviews

[Angels heart]

Like always, I love your poems. This one seemed REALY happy.

[FlamingPhoenix]

One thing is guaranteed--my poems are rooted in emotionality. Thank you for your review!

[Angels heart]

No prob. Poems are supposed to reflect the person writing them, maybe that's why I like you so much ;)

[FlamingPhoenix]

Aw--what a nice thing to say!

[Angels heart]

Thank you, people at I'm a natural kiss up ;)

[Kleio13]

"Life has brought me another muse ".

Excellent and this is the best poem that i have read from you so far.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you. I'm happy that you enjoyed one of my more 'fictional' writes :-)

[Kleio13]

O, anytime!

[Bluefire]

Tranquil, and sweet.
I like the happy ending and the light shining through this.
Well done. ^^

[FlamingPhoenix]

An undeniable light indeed...and yet...thank you for your review!

[Bluefire]

You're welcome. ^^

[Coyote Poetry]

You said so much in the short poem.
"No fear of enmeshment or lack of trust
We are both investing and creating a bond free from lust "
I wanted to know and read more. The poem create good visions and peaceful thoughts. I like the above lines and the beautiful artwork. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[FlamingPhoenix]

This piece was certainly inspired by a real person; however it's a bit of a fantasy write for me--though I am truly enjoying the journey of getting to know this person...I'm just uncertain--not sure what I'm willing to overlook and what I'm not--thank you for your review!

[Lyn Anderson]

this is a lovely, romantic and heart felt verse.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thank you :-). One of the many sides of the Phoenix!

[Aethereal]

Chemistry? In reality everything is Chemistry being that we're composed of a network of interlocking molecules, but this doesn’t mean that we're not greater than the sum of our molecular parts. Every chemist knows that when molecules join, they form synergies. Once you become a synergy, you enter that Twilight Zone which defies logic.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Hence my appreciation and delight in savoring every nuance of this red wine. I'm enjoying every conversation, every flirtatious look, every touch--and I'm watching, studying, learning. I too am the rarest red wine, and all wine needs to breathe. I'm not caught up in where my path could go because the now is a blessed reality. I guess sometimes we go through brief moments of hell so when we reach heaven we are ready--funny how this one was one I never noticed but has been around since last year--thank you for your review!

[Aethereal]

You're welcome! Drink no wine before its time.

[Bright Ocean Star]

This poem is rich with sweet sentiment and the savory spice of a new delectable friendship. Very nice write! thank you for sharing this beautiful write with us!

[FlamingPhoenix]

Yep! This lovely muse is rather extraordinary. Thanks for your review. I'm glad you enjoyed!

[Mike]

i absolutely love this poem. what a magical relationship you have.

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thanks, but it's not a relationship yet and I have zero desire to rush. This one is worth enjoying every nuance of the journey. I'd actually be most content in becoming the closest of friends and then seeing where Universe and angels direct. I actually enjoy this person that much--a rarity indeed! Thank you kindly for your visit and review!

[melissa]

This a beautiful poem keep up the great work and keep sending me more to read i love reading them

[FlamingPhoenix]

Thanks :-)

[melissa]

Your welcome