Wake Up

i fall to hard, my feelings to deep,

emotions are a battle, a hill to steep,

but i will climb that hill, and i will succeed, 

for my love for him drags me along,

pushing me to keep going, i will lead

i say three words and he says them back, 

he makes my heart flutter with his missing tact

it not just me and its not just him, its the expanse of this world that we are in

i can't keep fooling myself and i can't keep going under

i will not let myself fall back into amazement and wonder

i keep waking myself up, i keep letting my guard down

at this rate, i am going to let myself drown

drown in his presence, drown at his words, for he keeps speaking, luring me towards

Reviews

[acidmonkey]

Very good. I think you did a good job. Good job, I hope you keep writing.

[Jack Kennedy]

I have to say that this is the best I've read from you so far and this'll lead me to your other works here soon. 8.5/10