I Was Fine

I Was Fine

A Poem by Autumn T.
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Just a kind of sad poem. But hey, do I have many poems that AREN'T sad?

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I was fine.

All the laces were tied tight
The shoestrings pulled to knots
And the buckles locked in tight.

I was fine.

I was holding myself together
The glue was holding up
Duct tape hadn’t failed yet.

I was fine.

All the walls around were soundproof,
My vest deflected bullets then,
The city gates were holding firm.

I was fine.

Until you pulled the shoestring,
Peeled off the tape,
And knocked down the walls.

I was fine until you asked me what was wrong.

© 2011 Autumn T.


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Autumn T.
Criticism? Don't just say "OMG I like it :P" Like a goody-two-shoes haha.

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Autumn T.
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