Fucked up Mothers

title says it all

Mothers are mothers right?

WRONG

Mothers are the people who care for you

Mothers are the people who love without hate

Not the ones who beat, shout and spit on your face

Not the ones who slap, punch and say it out straight : 

"Your just a burden"

Mothers are the ones who cradle you in their arms, smiling with warmth

Protecting you from harms caused by people who hate yet so close

You hear how a mother sacrifises her life for her child

Why doesn't it happen now? Why are most of them beating up

All their children, are they prooving men wrong? 

That they are stronger?

I wish that we could understand,

Us kids who get beat up by the day

Have nothing but "Please help me god" to say. . .

Author's Note

ignore typos, to annoyed to fix them

Reviews

[Michael X]

wow, this is intently powerful, pure poetry in execution, the passion is heartfully expressed and say, its
heartbreaking to know that some mothers can't take responsiblity with pride or joy and I loved how
you brought about this facet that deals with the typified loser who abuses her child,
I just hope the kid is wise enough to see through such thin veils and know life should be enjoyed

[Bubo]

Yes, some mothers are not mothers, and we have to learn to get past the fact we share blood, but are not the same, and make hard decisions about keeping them in our lives...........strong piece.

[Domo]

Hm, seems like someone was pissed at the creation of this.

[emoprincess]

good

[David]

pretty powerful words there. Very angry. Good write