Break the chains

Break the chains

A Poem by Flo
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^-^ I <3 Numb By linkin park :3

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"I'm tired of being what you want me to be

Feeling so faithless, lost under the surface"

-Numb By: Linkin Park

 

Lost and confused, asuming that you were my model in life

I'd try to move away and ignore the tempt of the knife

Razors, knives and paper cuts

Trying to make me into one of those rich beautified s***s

Can't you see me for who I am

Can't you be happy with what I do

And to think I did all that just for you

For you to brag, brag and brag

Just to show your friends how you got the perfect daughter

Now your witnessing how your gold is turning into water

You just don't understand

You just don't want to hear

You only want your problems to dissappear

Your problems are me

The problems you see

Are from your own mistakes

And now your blaming me

So Im leaving this act for another girl

Im leaving this act for you to hold

Get a grip, dont waste your tears

Im not the one to hold you when your glory dissappears

Im leaving you with all my heart

Full of hate and shame, glad to be going apart

Glad that Im not yours anymore

Im me and I would be me

So the whole world could see

I'll be want what I want to be


 

 


 

© 2009 Flo


Author's Note

Flo
very rushed and a bit weird, enjoy and tell me what you think

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Very good, feels very familiar.

Definitely has the vibe of "Numb."


....Also I love Linkin Park. :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


That is amazingly beautiful, I absolutely love it. It has a kind of special effect on me. It makes me want to know you more.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Yo, I'm not gonna lie, that was one of the best poems I have ever read. Great job! ☺
~D♥m♥~

Posted 14 Years Ago


astonishing writing in emotional as well as visual context and the meaning is powerful,
your talent is woven in and out, the reader can feel the sincerity behind the wording
keep up the great work

Posted 14 Years Ago



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