Unattainable

Unattainable

A Poem by Alisa_the_fluff_ball
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About a girl I will always love and never have.

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Love is when she smiles.
You don't want to forget.

Its when she laughs.
Your favorite song.

When she walks away.
You want to follow.

When she speaks.
You wish you could respond.

When she looks at you.
You get lost in her eyes.

Its when she's kissing him,
And you want to die.

© 2011 Alisa_the_fluff_ball


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I've had this experience so many times! I love how simplistic this poem is. You make the words flow smoothly and you are going along with it and kind of are shocked at the end. :) well written

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

but then he will have no chance

Posted 12 Years Ago


ummmm seriously kyle can get for u


Posted 12 Years Ago



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Added on April 6, 2011
Last Updated on April 6, 2011
Tags: love, unattainable, lesbian, girl, never

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Alisa_the_fluff_ball
Alisa_the_fluff_ball

Ow. My life. It hurts.



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Hello all! My name is Alisa. I live to sing and to write. I am bisexual, if you have a problem with that, then please save us all the trouble and navigate away from this page. My style changes daily, .. more..

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