Apology Accepted???

You are the world's biggest jerk I have ever known,

Other than yourself, nobody you care for in this world,

Made me fall for you and then you revealed your true side,

Faking all the love, about everything you lied!

Like a toy you played with me all this time,

I was so in love with you that I turned completely blind,

After you finally did achieve your selfish motives,

You left me all alone, completely unnoticed!

But after some years there did come a time,

There was not a girl like me you could find,

And finally when you did realize my worth,

You fell on your knees and repented over!

You apologized to me for all that you did,

Finally you did accept all your mistakes,

But a really silly question you did ask me,

Accept my apology, another chance will you give me?

You made me cry and suffer so much,

You think one sorry is good enough?

A second chance........you think I should?

Well " Apology accepted??? " ....... MY FOOT!!!

Author's Note

So???? Did I take the right decision?? ;) Plzzzzzz do leave a review here!!! I would really appreciate it!!! Thank you!

Reviews

[ANTO]

Its almost two years since this was posted - so you tell us - did you take the right decision? It would be interesting to see what you thought in light of this poem - are you going to share with us??
I loved the tone of this writing and the whole 5 finger snap in the air at the ex's face in these words

[Flutterby aish]

Lolz..thank you. Well actually this was very much fiction. But to my surprise last year fiction actually turned into reality! :p but everything that hapenned in reality was different so ya....my reaction was different as well! thank you for reviewing though!

[Mirror]

Hello!

Well of course you took the right decision. I want to believe that no words can remedy for an action's result. Actions will always have more value than words.

I find interesting the finale even though it is totally different from my style. That does not mean it is bad, just quite different from me and that gives a particular character to the poem. That is good.

For me something negative is the "bad guy". I love it when the person that complicates our lives has some particular way of thinking or acting or has a great charisma. However from what I can feel he is just someone who lies and uses people. Someone who can see only till the point his eyes reach. Why did our girl fall for someone like that? It makes me feel like he dragged her into a smaller version of her and she just accepted it. That is bad.

This is just my point of view. Perhaps it expanded you in some way.

Till next time, take care and keep writing. :)

[Flutterby aish]

You point of view falls in line with the idea behind this poem. Thank you so much for stopping by. Much Appreciated!

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I love this poem. I recently like this past March-April behaved like a jerk to some girl and then, just like in your poem, I recognized my mistakes but it was to late. I asked for forgiveness but it was not granted. After reading your poem, I understand why. Why should anyone get away with playing with someone else's heart? I know understand her decision and honestly, I am the one who ended up losing. It taught be a great lesson and to behave like a gentleman, but your poem helps shed light from her point of view. Thanks for this wonderful poem. Laters, N.

[Flutterby aish]

I'm glad you liked it. Truly I believe, saying sorry is one thing and one might even accept your apology. But the real test begins right after that. When you have to prove that small little word, through your actions. That's the whole point. Its not the word that makes the difference, its your actions defining it (or contradicting it, the way you choose). Thankyou for reviewing!

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Thank your for your wonderful comments and sharing more insight on the this subject. Laters, N.

[Shaun Payton]

The right decision, if it took years for him to miss you enough and such, you made the right decision. Contriteness is better shown within a calming period, not months or years. Love from the heart and spirit to another is precious, some times rare in peoples lives.

[MandaBear]

"Well "Apology accepted??? " ....... MY FOOT!!!" Great stuff. Nice write

[Flutterby aish]

Thanx!!!

[Rahul]

I've made here my writings on the same tittle. very nice and you put me in the world to think or to write again about this tittle right now myself.
very nice again.
and yes, you did the right decision,adn yes, i really appreciated that.

[Flutterby aish]

Well.........I'm sure ganna check out ur writing right now!!!!!! Thnx alot for reviewing!!!!!!

[CreativeCookie]

I love this! Especially the last line: "Well "Apology accepted??? " ....... MY FOOT!!!"
Love,
CreativeCookie

[Flutterby aish]

thnx!

[Lina Grey]

if you think you made the right decision, then you did. no one else can tell you what the best call is for you to make.

[Kashif Waqas Ramay]

circumstance depended...:P
if u r satisfied with your decision then so be it