Hey! Mystery Boy

Hey! Mystery Boy

A Poem by Flutterby aish
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Going sinister with the season! :p

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Wearing a black cape and your head bent low,
Walking in the rain which has no effect on you,
A dark and sinister aura you create,
Still there's an urge to look at your face,

As you you walk down towards me, there's something about you,
Something that I know of, still I feel it's new,
Gently you walk towards me but my heart races fast
Finally you stop, my heart too comes to a halt!

I know now's the time, you'll reveal your true side,
I know now's the time, you'll show me what you hide,
As your hands move, towards the hood of your cape,
An irresistible urge in my heart takes place,

You hold your hood and look up, to face me,
I take a deep breath, now the secret will be revealed,
The mystery that had been haunting me every night,
A question lurking in my head, "Within the hood who lies?"

In the darkness, I try to look into your eyes,
My eyes grow wide as I see what lies,
Two hungry blood shot eyes stare from beneath,
Although I can't see but I know you're smiling at me,

Tonight I'm the one whose caught in your trap,
The girl who'll kill the desire of your heart,
You are the predator and the prey is me,
Another girl, another night, tonight your meal is me! 


© 2013 Flutterby aish


Author's Note

Flutterby aish
The girl dreams every night of a guy wearing a hood but can never see his face.....finally tonight the mystery boy reveals his identity but somehow.....this was not how the girl imagined it to be!!!
So guys what do you think??????

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Reading this gives a good feeling of curiosity. Definitely a plus.

Keep up the good work. Keep writing.

Posted 4 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

4 Years Ago

This was an old work, Makes me laugh now. Hahaa. Thank you for reviewing though!
well i was reading it like an innocent child and in the end it frightened me................
but it was really good..............

Posted 7 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

7 Years Ago

Hahaha......Thnx!!!!
This is wonderful imagination you carry FA, Well I loved your way of expressing your poem.
This is marvelous :)
Keep sharing :)
Cheers!
Singh :)


Posted 7 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

7 Years Ago

Thanx!
I like this one too...Thank you for sharing...:)

Posted 7 Years Ago


A interesting and scary tale. I like the way you led the reader to the good ending with no fear and accepting the ending. I like the artwork. You gave life to your words. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 7 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

7 Years Ago

Thank you !!
really good work , love it :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

7 Years Ago

Thank you!
ohh wow! i enjoyed it thoroughly! thumbs up! :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

7 Years Ago

Thank you!!
It was intense lol I really liked it a lot!

Posted 7 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

7 Years Ago

Thnx for the review!
That was cool. Like the big bad wolf of hell came along.

Posted 7 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

7 Years Ago

haha....yup! thnx for reviewing!
Shaun Payton

7 Years Ago

Welcome!:)
Ooohh... I loved the story you told through the poem. Intriguing. :) Awesome write as always :D

Posted 7 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

7 Years Ago

:) Thnx gurl!
Aehr

7 Years Ago

anytime sista :*

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Added on June 18, 2013
Last Updated on June 18, 2013
Tags: Supernatural, Horror, Surprising

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Wonder land! :p



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