Stolen

Stolen

A Poem by Flutterby aish

Bounded by the walls of your love,
Freedom is not an option for me,
Lost is the girl who lived for herself,
Captured in a prison she can't break free!

Infatuation was just an imagination,
I simply fell like a love sick retard,
Trust me, it hurts like hell now,
Now, when the real me is lost!

Crying somewhere in my heart, I am
Every minute as I fall apart,
Love was my crime, I now realize
Now, when the real me is lost!

How could I fall so badly for you?
How could I love you like that?
How could my feelings be strong enough?
That they killed the girl who once I was!

Lost in your world , I am now
Slave I am of my desires,
Craving and longing for your love, I am
Stolen is the real me, burnt in love's fire!

© 2013 Flutterby aish


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Flutterby aish
Well.........what say guys??????

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Amazzayn darlinggg :) Loved it

Posted 10 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

10 Years Ago

:p hehehehe!!!!!
emotional crisis depicted to perfection. very good work here :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

10 Years Ago

Thank you!
"Slave I am of my desires" Such a double edge sword; the truth. I like the strong emotion in your poem! :)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

10 Years Ago

Thnx for reviewing!!!
Morgan Storms

10 Years Ago

You're welcome!
Very good becca. Sad yet very good =)

Posted 10 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

10 Years Ago

Thank u for reviewing but Becca??????
A powerful and sad poem. It is sad when we fall into a bad love and place. The description was strong. Create visions of someone being used and took apart. I like the complete poem. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 10 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

10 Years Ago

Thank you for reviewing......u r always the first one to review my poems n i really appreciate that!.. read more

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