Day And Night

Day And Night

A Poem by Flutterby aish
"

Lover's forever.....

"
The dawn breaks in with a shimmering light
The sun peeks out with a smile so bright
That you miss the tears that she hides
Behind that happiness, sadness resides

She smile all day, she seems alright
No one knows what she fights
That light seems like a positive ray
So easily you are duped by the DAY!
         
But  as time rushes through sand glass hour
When sun seems closer, day seems far
For moments the lovers meet in twilight
For moments the DAY touches the NIGHT!

Then sets the sun, gone is the light
A sea of blue is now darkness of night
But once again, by beauty you are fooled
The rage of tears, by moon is cooled

The stars twinkle, he seems alright
No one knows, what he fights
Seems like spells of laughter, those twinkling whites
So easily you are duped by the night

But soon the light engulfs his darkness
Soon his darkness shields her light
For moments the lovers meet in Dawn
They unite once again to be TORN!!!

© 2015 Flutterby aish


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Author's Note

Flutterby aish
I guess broken things inspire me to write! ;p So here's a piece about Day and Night as Broken Lovers! Would love to know your thoughts on this one!

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Great rhyming and the telling of a sweet little tale of the night.

Posted 5 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

5 Years Ago

Thanks :)
africa

5 Years Ago

That's alright
The way you put things are beautiful! You have mastered that art- the way of making things beautiful and yet that pain reflecting! Liked the way how you connected sun and moon with broken lovers! Great imagination you have got!

Posted 5 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

5 Years Ago

Thank you sooo much. :) glad you liked it!
I love how the picture you posted reflects in the poem......it adds another level of artistry, and it something I try to do too, but I use actual paintings, because they then to convey deeper meaning than pictures....

And indeed....we are so easily duped by the night! I am writing a proposal to God to let the sun shine permanently......:)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

6 Years Ago

:D Thankyou for reviewing!
quick typo fix: Smiles* :) i love this so much! your personification is impeccable i would never had gotten it if it werent for the picture! i love how you did that! keep up the good work!


Posted 6 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

6 Years Ago

:D Thank you
Beautiful artwork and words.
"But soon the light engulfs his darkness
Soon his darkness shields her light
For moments the lovers meet in Dawn
They unite once again to be TORN!!!"
The light and the darkness are like lovers meeting in a secret place. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

Posted 6 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

6 Years Ago

Thank you for your kind words!
Coyote Poetry

6 Years Ago

You are welcome.
A unique take - the Sun is almost always portrayed as happy et al - ergo 'sunny disposition' so it was refreshingly new to me to read of it as sad under all that shiny brightness. I love new ways of looking at things - thank you for this
Ditto for the two 'lovers' meeting at dusk and dawn - Im fast becoming a fan of Flutterby Aish

Posted 6 Years Ago


Flutterby aish

6 Years Ago

Thank you. I'm glad you liked it.

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