Razorblade

Razorblade

A Poem by FocusedAmnesia

Realization.
Runs through my veins.
Anxiety.
At its best... and worst.
Zen.
Zoned in on that feeling.
Oblivious.
Only to the harm.
Relaxation.
Reaches my insides.
Breathe.
Breathe, breathe, breathe.
Listen.
Lightly to my conscience.
Aware.
Affirmative it will be done again.
Debilitated.
Darkness surrounds as my eyes slipped closed.
Elation.
Embedded within, now that I feel.

© 2010 FocusedAmnesia


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Morbidly beautiful. I love it.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

really liked this. like your writing style

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Repeated this in my head. Good poem that relaxed my mind.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I really like your style in writing poetry. Great job. Again enjoyed reading this.

Posted 9 Years Ago


This is perfect! Don't change a thing!!!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Cool poem. Just my kind of writing, simple to the point and very In your face
Thanks. Will keep reading you.

Thanks for your review of my poem. Glad you liked it

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This was a very interesting poem. I liked it, it was deep.
I really like the way you wrote it, it was interesting. This poem as all your other works, was amazing(:

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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