Favorite Explosion

Favorite Explosion

A Poem by FocusedAmnesia
"

Um... yeah...?

"
[Set me off.]
I'll be your favorite explosion.
One you can't control.





















[Ignite the flame.]
Are you ready to set me off?
You won't forget me.

© 2010 FocusedAmnesia


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I really like this poem, it's actually really good! I like the title- attracts the reader(: The picture you put with it makes the poem even better somehow, if that makes sense..I can only wonder where you got the idea to write such a magnificent poem.Ah well if I could I'd give it a 200 :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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Takes a hero to keep up.
I like it a lot.

Posted 8 Years Ago


simple. short. but a lot of meaning.
i love this. (:

Posted 8 Years Ago


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Posted 8 Years Ago


Nicely done, we'd all like to be set off from time to time, I think.

Posted 8 Years Ago


Such a short poem but so incredibly adorable and attracting. I loved the picture, really quite cute. The speaker of the poem... in my mind they have this cocky kind of sultry quality about their voice, tempting yet satirical. I really enjoyed this poem and rereading it in my mind is quite entertaining. Well done!

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

this is crerative, it's a party poem, has zest and feature and color,
snesuous fun and passion, the layout brings your words to life,
genuinely crafty, i enjoyed the simplicity of the wording as well.
its passionate and really brings the reader into the moment
the way you ask the question defines the meaning,
this is awsome, i really liked the overall feeling and design

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really like this poem, it's actually really good! I like the title- attracts the reader(: The picture you put with it makes the poem even better somehow, if that makes sense..I can only wonder where you got the idea to write such a magnificent poem.Ah well if I could I'd give it a 200 :D

Posted 9 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like the name alot, it reminds me of something...I wonder what happens when someone sets you off for real? I'm not quite sure what it means, but I like it alot.

Oh! maybe you try to convey that even though someone close is furious at you, you can't help but to love them? I'm just speculating. :)

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on August 26, 2010
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