Tin foil protector

2 weeks without, do i still have it?

Theory: I walk at the worlds pace.

Eating tracking devices to see what I've done comes back,

Locked away nowadays, I consort but never confront; the simplest mind is hardest to find,

For I've seen Starry Night, belief in disbelief as a child, now just sawdust,

Letting conscious invade trying to stop remembering dead dreams.

Practical: Proof from hand on stove.

Retiring individuality for an absolute peace in solitary confinement,

Convicted by false authority is acceptance by Him. I recall.

Careful what you wish for kinda life; outcast for seeking, where others flee.

I see no one ever says Peace of Heart, cause everyone knows.

Hypothesis: Still love

Welds bond stronger than metal alone,

If you don't bond you'll twist and groan,

Testing limits like a time traveling probe!

Calm faith, waiting, I laugh & cry, decaying sundial of mine.

Reviews

[Ken Simm.]

I like the way how you have elegantly constructed this Karl. The subject is developed through some exceptional wording.

[Karl Woof Junior]

thanks man

[Sami Khalil]

I like how you didvided this poem into three sections and defined your subject matter or experiences marvelously. The title is unique too...Bravo

[Karl Woof Junior]

thanks i do my best but my words have no meaning unless theyre sung by lana of me

[Sami Khalil]

I did not get that : lana of me . Would you explain?...

[Sami Khalil]

OK. Thank you kindly...:)