Solve Scared

Solve Scared

A Poem by paradise

            Slowly but

                         surely

             bit by bit

                Piece by piece

                          I will finish

                   the puzzle

                                of me

                           and I will just 

                     have to hope

                    that maybe

                                  one day

                I will once

                           again feel

                                 whole.

 

 

 

 

© 2011 paradise


Author's Note

paradise
Simple and short I wrote this at maybe 2 in the moerning I just wanted to leave it like so yeahhhhhhhh

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The journey of solving one's puzzle can be hard and filled with frustration as some of the pieces tend not to have images on them, just swirling emotions. To these words you have written, I say, have faith and just work through it. For if you're on the right path, you'll find the wholeness you seek. :-)

Aaron

Posted 12 Years Ago


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I love it. The format is really good to. I can relate. Great job :)

Posted 12 Years Ago


Always leave out one piece as to keep the voyuers guessing as to the real you lol. Love the simplicity of this piece showing the complexity of human nature. Keep em' coming and no more talk of leaving, even one star would be missed from the night sky

Posted 12 Years Ago


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