Endless Sky

Every once and I while I see the endless sky

The clouds of my existance it seems too high

extravagent beauty all around

Life's simple wonders showing around

 

Buzzing Bees

Swaying Trees

Feeling Free

Left to be Me

 

Stars Of Wishes

Taunt My dreams

Making me Wonder

is Life what it seems?

 

Does my existance

ever matter

I want to leave

I dont want to live

I want to forget

This lie cant be lived

 

Smile sweety

they dont know

your too special

to let down

a whole show

 

If I was gone

would you care

Would you notice

would I even cross your mind?

You'd miss me

but would you

I never think you would

I'm just a girl

You took her for a spin and a whirl

left her grasping for her breathe

leaving her wounding

She F*****g wants death

did u think this would be her wish

You eve think it might end  up like this

 

Does it even occur to you

she ready to die

shes ready to do it

commit suicide

what about her arms

did you see her scars

no i dont think so

you dont even notice self harm.

 

Author's Note

I wrote this after i kinna inspiration from my friend

Reviews

[Wolfwind]

Your words have power that makes one stop and think. The first part of the poem seems to deal with a person who has low self worth. The second half is showing us how people tend to see what they want to see, and not what they should. That's a hard lesson to learn and overcome and it takes working with others and patience and time.

Aaron

[LilMissWriter17]

I love this!!! I felt every word :) Amazing!

[The Girl with the smile]

This poem gave me chills. You can feel the emotion in every sentence. Its very good.

[Mari-Sweet]

This poem is very authentic. There are people out there who really feel this way.

[Olive Belikov]

i really like this poem; its so raw and dark its beautiful. great write