Melody Crash

Melody Crash

A Poem by paradise

I care

thats why I'm here

I will listen always

you can tel me

i will worry

but help...

~.~

 

I'm sorry the waves won't always crash

and the melody box won't play

the right tunes

but I'll always  be listening

when your feeling blue

 

 

© 2012 paradise


Author's Note

paradise
you know i will always listen ALWAYS! im tired of writing poetry on here im debating onn taking it off and leaving this website :)

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This is a very beautiful poem. I love the second stanza :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


I like the first verse of, " I care. That's why I'm here. I will listen always. You can tell me. I will worry but help." Everyone will need someone who care and helps. Its something anyone can relate to. Even myself. :) Short but sweet poem.


Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

how comforting to know someone out there cares.

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

listening to others is an art only few posses. being empathetic is the toughest thing to do. short and sweet. nice write.:0

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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