Close Your Eyes

Close Your Eyes

A Poem by paradise



Moonlight beam, across the trees

shallow waters,an open seed.

harshe winters,musical tones

springtime flowers

winters bone.


Clouds of wisp, a summers breeze.

An open window, a memerable dream.

Thunder roars, Birds they soar

twilight desire,

from the supernova fire.


A paino key, one's quiet plea.

A silent sound of ones sweeet serenity.

A humble voice, whispering a choice.


 promise broken, a chance to mend

Happiness close, soon to bend.

A dance of sorrows,

from which beauty cries.


Close your eyes, do not think

OPen your mind your on the brink


Parade lights, shine too bright.

a girl stands glowing in the dark of night.


Her smile is back

tears no more

shoving back the words

s**t dyke w***e

sining to the stars, dreaming far

believing again, running with pride

she's soaring finally, nothing to hide.


Hair is straightened,smile is wide.

Eyes are shining,legs kick high.

She's moving forward, forlong goodbyes

sadness is gone, eyes open wide.




© 2012 paradise

Author's Note

Look Deep Into Nature And You Will Understand Everything Better. - Albert Einstein

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Each word perfectly describes the romance... I admire your skills.

Posted 8 Years Ago

wow.. haha the first poem ive read by you and I'm amazed x) this is so good! you are realling good at expressing that feeliong of breaking free and letting go and finally not caring about what other people think :) and I like your rhyming scheme a lot too! :D i realize thats probably how youve always written, ha its different for me and like whenever i try to do it it just sounds like its not done.. O.o

haha anyway, awesome write :) its one of my favorites x)


Posted 10 Years Ago

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Added on May 11, 2012
Last Updated on August 2, 2012




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