Lone Girl

Lone Girl

A Poem by ForeverTheLoner

A lone girl looking for a friend 
but she doesn't know where to begin
so she trust everyone who comes around
in the end they always let her down
guys just want her for sex
when there done they just move on to the next
bad thing is she says that she cant change
shes good with her life no need to rearange
she tells me shes used to the pain
knowing I cant help her drives me insane
A lone boy with a broken heart
he just lays in the bed watchin his life fall apart
sad and alone wanting to find a girl that wnt lie
someone who wld hold him when he had to cry
A lone boy who met a lone girl
from the moment that he seen her he wanted her in his world
A lone girl who met a lone boy he soon became her best friend
he had a crush on her but he had to pretend
that everything was casual 
cause if she knew it might get unusual
a lone boy getting tired of holding his feeling in
it will eventually eat him from within
~Forever TheLoner~

© 2012 ForeverTheLoner


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This poem, is just lovely. The imagery was wonderful, I had the perfect image of those lonely teenagers.
Other than the few spelling errors this piece was superb. I enjoyed reading it.
The line "Knowing I can't help her drives me insane" made the image for me. Perfectly. Besides the fact that it is written in first person. Lovely. A good read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This poem, is just lovely. The imagery was wonderful, I had the perfect image of those lonely teenagers.
Other than the few spelling errors this piece was superb. I enjoyed reading it.
The line "Knowing I can't help her drives me insane" made the image for me. Perfectly. Besides the fact that it is written in first person. Lovely. A good read.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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