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Compartment 114
Compartment 114
A Missing Piece of The Puzzle

A Missing Piece of The Puzzle

A Poem by Forevermore
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i told my friends & favorite teachers goodbye & some in tears hugged me & didnt want me to go as much as i dont want to leave the love shared is great for motivation 2do well & return a better man

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You will be missed

Your smile, your laugh

Your memorable ways

Your mentality

 

People know you for who you are

What you say, the way you dress,

Everything you represent will be remembered

 

Those important to you, and true to you ...

will remember you and smile

They will speak of your good deeds

and laugh at your wrongs and remeber you are only human

 

You will be missed

Missed by those old and young

Black and white, latino, and asian

You will be a missing piece of the puzzle

 

And the day you return, they will gather and swarm you with the love you left in their hearts

© 2012 Forevermore


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this is how i feel about my mom and the fact u wrote something this touching and real is amazing


Posted 12 Years Ago


Lovely write and tribute to those you leave behind and to yourself.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Although this is a wonderful piece, I would personally capitalize all the races listed. Overall, this poem is beautifully done. Thank you, sir.

Posted 12 Years Ago


its so deep and emotional and it really makes you feel the emotions that you've put down on paper so beautifully

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Such a lovely write. I felt the strong emotions in this.

Posted 12 Years Ago


You have done your teacher a great honour by writing this poem, you have talent and have learned a lot about writing, well done.

Posted 12 Years Ago


At first I thought you were writing about the death of a loved one, but then I read the subtitle. It's really good! And by the way, I've been to 13 different schools in my life.... you'll be just fine, I promise. =)

Posted 12 Years Ago


its so hard to move. i've done it so many times. it means the most to know that you'll be missed.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Great piece, I like the meaning and what this means to you other people can look at it completely different. That takes true talent, to write about an event in your life but yet other people can relate it to there life. This will make you a very poular writer. There was a grammatical error or two.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Added on March 23, 2012
Last Updated on March 26, 2012