Barrowed Time

Barrowed Time

A Poem by Forevermore

When it came to you and me .... I never , I'd never

Once it was to be .... I never , I'd never want to leave

Even when it rained, i knew that someday the sun would shine again

I never, not ever

Even if I wanted. I'd never, I'd never

Tornado in the winds, run faster

Run awaaaay, run faster

Run faster awaaaaay

Take my hand, bring your body close tooo meeeee

I can't lose you, Come back to me

Please, Please

 (alarm clock) "Beep beep beep beep beep"

 

© 2012 Forevermore


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Aloha,

This one sounds like a very intriguing dream. Curious to find out what happened next.

Thanks for sharing.

alisa ;-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


i love the fact this is a dream and the way it is written is amazing

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I almost get the impression of living a dream before the dreaded alarm clock ends it all. Nice write.

Posted 12 Years Ago


still loathing that "beep beep beep beep beep" i so hate you right now! (: wish i could write like you do! -s

Posted 12 Years Ago


UGH S**T! i hate i hate i hate i hate alarm clock beeps! there is nothing in this world that i hate more.... That is why I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE I LOVE... what you did here... if we ever hang out someday though... expect a nasty wake up call jerk!!!! BRILLIANT WRITE! keep it up! -s

Posted 12 Years Ago


Excellent lyrics Forevermore, I couldn't help but find myself singing along. :)

Posted 12 Years Ago



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