thiRteen

thiRteen

A Poem by Emma Lee-Riviera
"

For Rachel Scott, with respect. I Accept Your Challenge.

"

thiRteen

the kiss of death descends

silent float dRift sway

feathers of potential

destroyed

 

slip

cRystalline dRops cling

calm patient waiting

petals cRadle tears

lovingly

 

hidden among weeds

gRaced by light

held foReveR in ouR heaRts

© 2012 Emma Lee-Riviera


Author's Note

Emma Lee-Riviera
Written in an extremely, powerfully emotional moment after a Rachel's Challenge presentation.

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I felt like crying while reading your piece. It's a really deep and emotional write and you didn't fail and present this in an incredibly creative manner.

Well done :)

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emma Lee-Riviera

7 Years Ago

:o!! Did Fran go with him? Like a frog/apple sidekick?
Katherine Enma Pineapple

7 Years Ago

Of course! Add more to the fruit bowl dear :D

So the frog-slash-apple and the purple pi.. read more
Emma Lee-Riviera

7 Years Ago

A Tuna fish?!?! *finds Goku-kun and pets his (adorable) hair* Was the Tuna fish half man and half se.. read more
That was beautiful! I loved it :) You have good word use that captivated the true meaning in rachels challenge

Posted 7 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Emma Lee-Riviera

7 Years Ago

Thank you! ^///^
My arms are not long enough... are you OK?

Posted 7 Years Ago


Emma Lee-Riviera

7 Years Ago

I'm not gonna lie... I bawled. And made my other friends cry, too. ^///^
Ufi Auttorri ~ UfoAuthor

7 Years Ago

The music of life can do that to humans with a compassionate mind.
Emma Lee-Riviera

7 Years Ago

I couldn't help it... It was so unbelievably tragic that such a kind girl could be murdered like it .. read more

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Added on September 19, 2012
Last Updated on September 19, 2012
Tags: rachel, scott, rachel's challenge, thirteen

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