A Poem by Foxemerald

A love poem. It's so romantic sitting on the porch at two am and writing to a piece of music like this while looking at a black sky :)


(Written to one of my favorite songs)

You work your hands 

Under my skin, and bow your head

Over my chest. Your fingers inch along my back

And linger there, but for a minute, then make their way south-

I breath into your face, a sigh of fluttered need and soft

Delight, let my cheek glide along 

Your skin, and then with gentle force I pull you in, 

Deeper and deeper like a bow, I stretch myself until I finally let you

Go, and play you like an instrument of ease upon which 

My hands are cascading and they became 

Submissive, lost within a frenzy of moving parts and sheer velocity, 

a wonderful creation painted in the 

Murmur of two two bodies, rocking beneath the stars a quiet song a,

Silver line twisted into a meter which only God

And His angels have caught, but to them it’s a full out symphony-

My dear, and at the end we list upon the grasses, and everyone is quiet save for 

The sound of breaths, and I look into your eyes and

You get your message across it-


The angels are now applauding us. 


Dedicated to William Boyd 

Emerald ~

© 2021 Foxemerald

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Beautifully conveyed. Erotica is not my usual read, but you have nailed it here. Well done Emerald.


Posted 8 Months Ago


7 Months Ago

Ohh, thank you very much! I'm glad you enjoyed it Chris.
Very nice erotica here, and not a vulgar word therein. I'll take " a frenzy of moving parts and sheer velocity" over all the barnyard/barroom/barracks trash that was ever written.

Posted 1 Year Ago


7 Months Ago

I'm glad you enjoyed. I like relating the erotic experience to art and music :)
A beautiful love poem and the symbolism you use really paints an amazing loving moment that becomes divine in nature. Thank you for sharing your work.

Posted 1 Year Ago


1 Year Ago

You are welcome. Thanks for your review and sorry for the delay, my friend. God bless ~

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Added on June 3, 2021
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