Standing Still

Standing Still

A Poem by Deranged Kiwi

I stand…
Silent,
Waiting,
Watching.
Shallow truths denatured
Hollow promises vanish

Time..
Here,
There,
Always.
Breathing in the past
And Shedding the future

Why bother?
We’re only passing time
Waiting for our ticket to be called
Game over

© 2009 Deranged Kiwi


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Very nice! excellent work, i love the line 'Shallow truths dentured. Hollow promises vanish'

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Deranged Kiwi

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