A Distant Lovesong

`` A Distant Lovesong ``

 

Darling, you're my winner
perhaps my loser too
but then, love is a gamble
and all my bets ride on you.

Baby, Life being the mystery
Which some people say it is
Leaves me willing to stake a claim
and therefore, place my bid.

And honey. with you
'Tis where I choose to be
So step into this heart of mine
and throw away the key
We'll take it one step at a time
and dance our love into eternity.

Know this to be true my dear
You're like a recorded song
one which plays over and over again
in which we both belong

Yes, A Distant Lovesong
singing out your name
Echoing thru~ a Whispering Wind
Amidst a Misty~Midnight Rain.

 

Reviews

[Bhavya Kaushik]

This is a very beautiful piece with true feelings...
very good indeed...
I really like these lines a lot..
"Yes, A Distant Lovesong
singing out your name
Echoing thru~ a whispering wind
amidst a misty~midnight rain.
""--Beautifully written..

A poetry with a good feel and meaning..

Thanks a lot for sharing it here!

[Deeksha]

Very well written. :)

Good luck in my contest. :)

[babyblue]

great poem it's beutiful,and romantic.

[Tammy]

Wonderful write....

[Adrian K. Smith]

I enjoyed the casual tone of this piece. It had a demure intensity of the emotion, rather than feeling like we hit by a sledgehammer with it. It had that certain friendly feel to it, stating love for what it is without all the pretense. An excellent work...

[Tara Jean Olson]

gorgeous! enchantingly romantic. definetely a favorite

[mattavelli]

This is beautiful.
Take care. :)

[The Archangel Gabriel]

Fran-

Another beautiful write. I am going to add pictures (partly so that some people are not unfairly ignored due to lack of sex appeal), and you might want to grab them. I grabbed the angels picture; that is really beautiful!

"Darling, you're my winner
perhaps my loser too"

That's pretty good! I had a few of those myself!

"but then, love is a gamble
and all my bets ride on you."

Big bucks! No whammies! (That's from "Press Your Luck" in the eighties, maybe?)

Great job!

-Gabe

[Cold Coffee Magazine]

You opened your heart in this one too. I love it when you do that.

Super write.

Dave

[Klyn]

This is just oozing with romance! Wonderful!