Autumn's Bouquet

 

 

 

 

 

                            In amber tones from misty jade green

                           she makes her move onto the scene

                           in all her bare beauty, yet fully dressed

                           in golden hues she's at her best

                           scarlet shades of red,and deep burgundy provide

                           a picturesque view to capture our eyes

                          An autumn queen dons her royal purple robe

                          amidst yellow leaves entwined 'pon her clothes

                          and  sprink'ling  rain adds a fresh wet scent

                         'tis autumn's parfume from the heavens sent

                          with a sapphire mixture of her cool crisp air

                         'tis autumn's warm bouquet worn in her hair

                          yes, oh  yes, the heart is there.

 

Reviews

[Abhilash Hegde]

This is such a fresh breeze of poetry here.
A woman's beauty is in her hues, hair, eyes, robes, scent and air.
Yes, a Heart is always right there.
So beautifully descriptive, images come alive and dance in a song.
Loved the imagery here. Thanks for sharing.

[Fran Marie]

thanks AH
so vey much
I do so appreciate;

[Abhilash Hegde]

you're very welcome..

[Chloe..Across the Unive..]

Gorgeous! Beautiful images and colors.

n autumn queen dons her royal purple robe

amidst yellow leaves entwined 'pon her clothes

and sprink'ling rain adds a fresh wet scent

'tis autumn's parfume from the heavens sent

with a sapphire mixture of her cool crisp air

'tis autumn's warm bouquet worn in her hair

Lovely Fran.. Autumn is a lady.

Chloe

[scott 37]

You've lulled me. What a great calm, peaceful poem. So intune with the season.

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on this wonderful winning poem!

[Hannah]

This is great! It flows wonderfully. It also provides the reader with wonderful images of fall. I personally love how you have not simply used fall or autumn, instead you have referred to the season as a female. By doing this it compares fall/autumn to a female. And females are known for beauty. Good luck!

[Theresa]

Wow! This captures Autumn's essence perfectly. I was going to attempt to write a poem about my favorite season, but after reading this I don't even want to try. The imagery you create is just great. Good job. Love it.

[cest la vie]

This is a beautiful depiction of my favorite season. I love the changes in the foliage, air.Livivn in Fla I miss that and you have allowed me to experience it once more. Beautifully done!

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Wow I just love Autumn, the cool air, smells of fire places burning and the rains falling all around... such beautiful imagery you invoke with this divine piece.

[Adela Muresan]

Ohh, how lovely :).
It's great imagery and flow, make it a pleasurable write.

A.M.

[Donna DeLong Matthews a..]

How beautifully descriptive... I have always found fall so beautiful
yet so sad... our beautiful mother earth sleeps until her reawake'n
in Spring (my favorite time of year)
Very well written
Hugs
Donna