`Words of Love`

~Words Of Love~(Sonnet)

 

Love you are to me, drops of honeywine
With each new kiss beneath the golden sun
Your lips sweet bouquet, quench this thirst of mine
Our love has entwined, for all time as one.

Valentine,we shall sing loves sweetest tune
Share eternal bliss, 'neath a silver moon
Of Cupid's Cup, we'll drink a toast to love
Kindly condoned by the heavens above

Let's reach for the highest star in the sky
These words of love, are meant for only you
The sun, moon and stars, know this to be true
Forever, we'll cherish love, you and I

You are to me sweet Love, my heart's delight
These Words of Love I'll pledge, each day, each night.

Reviews

[MomzillaNC]

Great mythic imagery for Valentine's Day: "drops of honeywine" in "Cupid's Cup." This is a wonderful answer to the Valentine's Day Challenge -- and you didn't even have to wrack your brain for something new! :D

This one hales back to Victorian romantic poetry for me. Love it. How did I miss it before?

NOTES: you need spaces behind several of your commas

[Fran Marie]

Most definitely an oldie from years ago, thanks so much for reviewing and the notes..

[MomzillaNC]

yw :)

[Matching Socks]

Words of love meant only for that special one. Very romantic Fran Marie!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks, Ana,so very much

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

And you come first to haha, just realized it was the same person now :)
I have reviewed your stuff before so you know i love this poem.
Very sweet romantic and touching.
I love the way it rhymes i think that's what i like most.
CONGRATS ON COMING FIRST!

[Fran Marie]

thanks so very much for reviewing my poetry; and for first place....
much appreciated;

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

your very much welcome :)

[cimmy wuv xxxooo]

this is incredibly sweet defiantly heartfelt, and touching. So much emotion i feel your love for this person and i bet hes a very lucky man. Have you showed him this peace? Anyway i loved it touched my heart keep writing :)

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Congrats on your great winning poem! And Still Beautiful!

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Aaaaw! Very sweet and romantic. Thanks for entering my contest!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautiful Beautiful Beautiful

[jeRRy.whaLLey]

oh our Hearts know this, Love attracts Love, the secret to all bliss - here you have savoured the sweetness of Love in words that cherish and a lyricism that smiles upon the face of the beloved - Oh to kiss the beloved with the same kiss the beloved kisses me and in that kiss live an eternity -

[A.L. James]

You are such a romantic!

[All faded blue]

Very nicely done.