Deep Burgundy

Deep Burgundy

A Poem by Fran Marie
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love sonnet

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Once our Love was new, burning scarlet flames
'neath purple velvet skies, stars spoke our names

Love was life's Blood, A paradise sublime
coursing our veins~granting pleasure divine
suddenly stars faded to a Mauve hue
and a bright crescent moon slipped out of view
Passionate kisses turned into goodbye
Scarlet flames vanished, a blank canvas dried
Without your Love,days turned dull-dreary grey
My life painted void, dark destiny's play
It's strange you realized love lost was true
returning to me, we simply both knew

Now we're strong in the Love, that came so late
Stained in Deep Burgundy, well worth the wait


 

 

© 2008 Fran Marie


 

© 2009 Fran Marie


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"Love was life's blood,", This speaks of love's depth, how vital it is to life.

"It's strange you realized love lost was true
Returning to me, we simply both knew

Now we're strong in the love, that came so late
Stained in Deep Burgundy, well worth the wait", It is fortunate that this love returned to you. I am happy for you.



Posted 12 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Gee
Beautifully written Fran Marie

Posted 1 Month Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

thnks Gee
s o very much
hope you are doing
well;
This is so wonderful and descriptive loved it, thanks for entry into my competition

Posted 1 Month Ago


Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

1 Month Ago

Didn’t u enter this in my colours competition
  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

I think so..i have
to go check..i enter
so many.. I'm a contest
addict..lol
Julie McCarthy (juliespenhere)

1 Month Ago

You got a place
Wow. I absolutely adore this piece!! A favorite of mine for sure! This was stunning! I saw color vividly before my eyes and the love changed. The ending is fantastic! Truly, an amazing write!! xo (:

Posted 6 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

6 Years Ago

Thanks so much
Now we're strong in the Love, that came so late
Stained in Deep Burgundy, well worth the wait

Lovely words with a strong ending. I so enjoyed these lines "suddenly stars faded to a Mauve hue
and a bright crescent moon slipped out of view." Kudos!

Posted 6 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

6 Years Ago

thanks so very much,
Very beautiful story/poem.
Very touching and romantic.
Congratulations on coming second in my contest TRUE LOVE :)
I love the whole story line to this has great meaning.
True love does always come back, very sweet happy ending to.
Loved the read job well done :)

Posted 6 Years Ago


Now we're strong in the Love, that came so late
Stained in Deep Burgundy, well worth the wait

Awsome lines here, this is amazing.
I like this alot

Posted 10 Years Ago


very well written! expressive and enjoyable to read!
great work with this

Posted 10 Years Ago


Thank you for entering my contest! This is a very creative piece. I enjoyed it very much. The color scheme was very original. I am glad that this poem ended happily. Thank you once again for sending it to me! God Bless!

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Beautiful!
Such emotion painted in colors true to life...
Lovely and so real
TY for entering!

Lynda


Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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