Deep Burgundy

Deep Burgundy

A Poem by Fran Marie
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love sonnet

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Once our Love was new, burning scarlet flames
'neath purple velvet skies, stars spoke our names

Love was life's Blood, A paradise sublime
coursing our veins~granting pleasure divine
suddenly stars faded to a Mauve hue
and a bright crescent moon slipped out of view
Passionate kisses turned into goodbye
Scarlet flames vanished, a blank canvas dried
Without your Love,days turned dull-dreary grey
My life painted void, dark destiny's play
It's strange you realized love lost was true
returning to me, we simply both knew

Now we're strong in the Love, that came so late
Stained in Deep Burgundy, well worth the wait


 

 

© 2008 Fran Marie


 

© 2009 Fran Marie


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"Love was life's blood,", This speaks of love's depth, how vital it is to life.

"It's strange you realized love lost was true
Returning to me, we simply both knew

Now we're strong in the love, that came so late
Stained in Deep Burgundy, well worth the wait", It is fortunate that this love returned to you. I am happy for you.



Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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love as color, what a beautiful treatment. This is a wonderful poem.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

... I love it... However postion of the titles freaks me out... it's centered and the text isn't...

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

well executed sonnet and if feels right. maybe the gentler burgundy love of later life is more reliable than fiery red love of early youth.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

The colors are the key to the write and leave a great impression of what can be. I love the flow and speed because they keep my attention throughout the read. Great job.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

What a beautiful, redemptive tale. Your use of colors here is truly Divine. As an artist, an intriquing line for me is how a blank canvas can dry - interesting choice of words. Thank you for sharing.
Light,
Siddartha


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A wonderful piece....well written great job!!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

A lovely colourful write. Flows so beautifully.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very well written. Lovely poem!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Very very beautiful poem... Nowthatswhat I call love... putting this in my favs!!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is a wonderful poem, flows well and the imagery is amazing. Great work Fran!

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 23, 2008
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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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