Adore

senryu

I simply adore

       kissing you~ want to explore

 

                        so  much more  of you

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

We are so alone arent we? I mean the idea of being in a single body. Sharing exploring is how we sense the world . Very good

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Tate..yes we are a single entity
feeling alone without touch and exploring
I s o appreciate your review;

[Chris Shaw]

This is a hot senryu Fran. The kisses lead to so much more and my imagination is completely running away with me :) I am feeling the heat here.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris..glad you enjoyed the
brief heatwave..i appreciate your words

[Betty Hermelee]

a luscious Haiku with such deep meaning in so few words....soft and sensitive
Thank you for sharing Fran....
Best, B.

[Fran Marie]

Thank you. Betty..
for your kind words..i so appreciate

[Betty Hermelee]

You're very welcome Fran
Best to you, B.

[R.E. Ray]

Fran, I can almost hear her or him (in the photo) whispering this senryu to the other.

You’re a master of the simple, elegant poems.

[Fran Marie]

thank s Robert..so much for reading
I appreciate your kind words
on m y. poetry;

[Ghost]

Such brief inviting words of love and adoration to someone special... nicely written

[Fran Marie]

Many thanks for reading my poetry and the reviews

[Jibey]

Inviting, enticing, so very erotic... A wonderful exemplar of 'less is more'

[Nadia Gerassimenko]

very sensual, exquisite poesy!
simple and to the point but gorgeous just as much!

[Geo Lawrence]

a wonderful haiku. beautifully written. can't get any better than this.

[Perkele.7885]

Kissing seems to have that effect across the board as a starting interest on the to exploration. I have often offered myself as a stand-in if a guy for some reason cannot make it and you have already committed yourself to the endeavor. I would hate to see you disappointed.

[Winslow Des Totes]

Hehehe in the words of the imortal George Takei "Oh myy!"

[Fran Marie]

Lol.. thanks, Winslow ..so much...

[Winslow Des Totes]

;) no thank you