^Psychic^

^Psychic^

A Poem by Fran Marie

Psychic

eye
Views
visions
of slayings
violence, death
bloodied knifed corpses
she sees it with her mind's
eye of a tragedy, yet
to unfold. A Psychic witness
to weird murders; sensitive always
with eyes on the threshold of tragedies


 

© 2008 Fran Marie


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wonderfully done...as someone whose worst dreams sometimes fortell of tragedy I can relate...which is why when I got to the last line...I was sure it was going to end "on the threshold of madness". Was relieved to see tragedies there which may sound odd, but it gives me hope for my own sanity. awesome job.

laura

Posted 16 Years Ago


3 of 3 people found this review constructive.




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Yes we can't always choose what we tune in to

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Original subject,well done on a good write


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I've gotta go with Anthony, Cannot imagine how someone could live day to day with such disturbing visions flashing randomly threw their head ! Well done, Fran, well done
Sandra♥

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Fran a thought provoking poem, makes us wonder how someone who visualizes these types of tragedies can go about everyday life. This must be a haunting way to live.
Tony

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I like the content...it reminds me of the women on the talk shows...the silly mediums who only prey on the obvious grieving process when emotions are so openly worn on the sleeve.

If I were psychic, I would use my powers for good....ok, I lie...I would be selfish, and play the lotto, and win...and move into obscurity....

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I agree with Lori. Very well written indeed. :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

I liked your style of writing here, this reminds me of the show Medium.
This is one subject we don't see very often. Very good poem.
Alba :-)


Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

This is very cerebral. This is very, -surreal-.

Yes, visions can indeed become tragedy, as they both go hand in hand...

they stem from dreams.

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

Eyes on the threshold of tragedies... such beautiful and sorrow filled words. Great write.


Brette

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

great write! i like how you viewed the psychic as a helpless bystander to murders. good job! :)

Posted 16 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.


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Added on February 24, 2008

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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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