Keep It Real

Keep It Real

A Poem by Fran Marie
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love poem

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Keep it real my darling

       no hearts and flowers for me

              'tis but your sweet love,yes

                 which fills my ev'ry need

 

 

 

keep it real my dear

    don't show me false attitudes

                only sincere affections

                     makes my dreams come true

 

 

 

Keep it real honey

     let no lies fall from lover's  lips

                   give unto me your kisses

                           from which sweet honey drips

 

 

 

Keep it real babe

    in your heart,your mind and soul

               'tis when I'll give unto thee

                        the deepest part of me to behold

 

© 2010 Fran Marie


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There's nothing like the real deal! When we are surrounded by false pretenses, your poem displays the true meaning of love. Picking a few flowers from a garden while passing by is always tender! It's the special things close to the heart that matter, as you pointed out in this genuine, intimate poem.

Posted 13 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.




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ANM
Love, love,love, all you need is love.....very good write!

Posted 7 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

7 Years Ago

Thanks so much,
ANM

7 Years Ago

You are welcome!
Whooooo nice me gal. now this is love at its best.. I sooo adore your romantic nature, it makes one warm and feeling so Oh La La. Now this was def a winner for sure.. Lovely

Mags xxx

Posted 10 Years Ago


really beautiful poem, congratulations for winning the contest

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

A very authentic piece of writing. Truly beautifully expressed...the depths of true love. The last stanza is my favorite. Exquisite...

Posted 11 Years Ago


lol I loved this little piece... its perfect intro to the group!! thanks for sharing ; )

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Once again, this is beautiful :] I'm so glad that you submitted this so I got the chance to read it

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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O!
Your belief in being authentic is what makes u tick...thats lovely.

Thank you for joining the contest.

x,
O!


Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is beautiful and meaningful, I love it. Keeping it real is such a key aspect to life, in my view and in yours too it seems.

Nice poem

Love
Me

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

"Being real" is the only way there is in my books. What are flowers without true love? False attitudes & lies, pretense...who needs it? Who can trust someone that isn't sincere? You can smell a skunk from a mile away.

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You've got to be true to yourself before you can be true to someone else, right?

Well done.

Dave

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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