Illusions

Illusions

A Poem by Fran Marie
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Dark Poetry

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 Hazy moonlight stretched across the night sky
as I gazed from my window at a starless night
I percieved visions~ myself a stone illusion
and gloom fell heavy 'pon my heart and soul
an illumation in grayish blue tone of rigor light
like none of which I've seen before
yet facination overwhelmed me
as zig-zagged shadows danced in confusion
across my darken bedroom floor
'Oh, what fate would befall me, no clue had I
Nor could I fathom what evil shadows had taken control
On this eve of dark December,strange illusions danced free
 at the stroke of midnight plus one hour more
 

 

© 2009 Fran Marie


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You really captured the night in this prized poem of yours. All the words come together to make a unique performance. Your words: "facination overwhelmed me as zig-zagged shadows danced in confusion across my darken bedroom floor" really grabbed me!



Posted 11 Years Ago


4 of 4 people found this review constructive.




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I enjoyed this write Fran, nicely written

Posted 7 Years Ago


Nor could I fathom what evil shadows had taken control
On this eve of dark December,strange illusions danced free
at the stroke of midnight plus one hour more

awesome.

Posted 9 Years Ago


I really enjoyed this piece. The description is vivid and detailed, bringing the words to life and really exemplifying the mystery and the texture of this poem. Such beauty in this one and the flow is wonderful. I enjoyed the style you wrote this in and it kept me intrigued the whole way through. Well done.

Posted 9 Years Ago


Thats a beautiful poem. Wonderful imagery and emotion are what gives it life. Nice work.

Posted 9 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Amazing!! This is great..it grabbed me..i agree with the featured review ..it grabbed me too

Posted 10 Years Ago


Congrats on your great winning poem!

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

You really set the mood well in this poem. Your descriptions of the lights and tones was very image inspiring.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

wow awsome poem i liked it good job

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I like the way you described the sensation of evil's presence, in poetry.

Great write.

A.M.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Another great poem from you Fran. Great job.

Posted 10 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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