Line

Line

A Poem by Fran Marie
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Senryu

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I'm an unused line

caught between your choice of words

erased from your mind

© 2010 Fran Marie


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This a powerful piece as it caused me to stop and think about things around me and the world as whole. The pure conveying of some thing more than what is merely stated as we see lines as the meaning of everything and nothing. We can see the depth of a souls perspective being unraveled before our very eyes and what truth have we learned to knowing something of the everything that comes together to make each of us whole and as individual parts of a larger picture of the world.


Great Job!!!!!!

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.



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short piece, and it still grabbed my attention.


great write

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Fourteen words was all it took for you to chain my attention and set my imagination free. I loved this, Fran, well done.

Dave

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Very nicely done. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

Posted 12 Years Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

WOW, Fran, this succinct write could keep me thinking for days! Absolutely wonderful! Lydia

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Thanks

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

This is a great senryu. A forgotten line caste out by the writer, deemed not suitable enough for their piece. Wonderful.

Posted 12 Years Ago


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That is so irritating....to want to write something, to know what you want to say....then gone....gone forever...

I like this piece...short, sweet, and packs a heavy lesson!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Oh, so slick. Read between the lines! So simple, yet so many fail to see it, or at least I hope that's what you meant by this. I could be wrong, but it won't be the first time!

Posted 12 Years Ago


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Fran Marie

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