Broken Tape

Broken Tape

A Poem by Fran Marie
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Senyru

"
can't rewind your life
like old black and white movies
once you add drama

© 2018 Fran Marie


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Ahhhh...so much drama locked into this one :) We all face drama from time to time - that's life, though there is a category of person who tends to cause their own drama - on top of what life might send their way. Hard to point that out though...:)

Great poetry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

So true.
.thanks so vey much for reviewing my poetry



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interesting way
to use a film metaphor
it does make one think


Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks so very much for reviewing..
Misterr Remeat

5 Years Ago

My Pleasure!
Wow. This is something to ponder on :D

Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks. Sarah..so much appreciatd..
Ahhhh...so much drama locked into this one :) We all face drama from time to time - that's life, though there is a category of person who tends to cause their own drama - on top of what life might send their way. Hard to point that out though...:)

Great poetry.

Posted 5 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

So true.
.thanks so vey much for reviewing my poetry
Very deep words Fran Marie. Ugly words especially stick like broken and sticky tape. A cleverly done, vivid kind of senryu.

Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks Dhara so vey much for reading..I appreciate it..
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

5 Years Ago

You’re welcome Fran Marie.
Neat as neat can be, precise, restrained.. and yet, oh so true. No return, can't re.wind. But lessons learned, memories stored or deplored. Whatever between happening and this moment, time shows a different dimension, perhaps. You've always touched heart and mind, Fran.


Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks so very much Emmajoy.for the review on my poetry..
I can almost see the tape unravelling when the drama hits.
and you can pick it up and wind it back up but you can't smooth out the wrinkles.
they're permanent

Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks Ana..I so appreciate
Right. it's small but deepest.

Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks so very much;
that is so true...i really like the idea of this, but even more so, i love the use of black and white movies...
they are so classic...and are long gone...we can never go back to the way it was, can we?

Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob ..unfortunately we can not..
As much as we sometimes think we would, most of us actually wouldn't

Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks Lyn.. I so appreciate
Very thought-provoking & also a fresh way to arrange these familiar imagery phrases! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 5 Years Ago


  Fran Marie

5 Years Ago

Thanks so very much for reading..Much appreciated

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Fran Marie

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