Tattoo My Soul

Tattoo My Soul         

Tattoo my soul with your poet's pen,
Perchance I'll want to live again.
Say sounds so softly with each line,
Whispering words of love,
Making them Mine.

Fill my heart with your poet's ink,
A cupid's cup of which I'll drink.
Reaping romance of rhymes you write
Gleefully gladens with gay delight.

Send my senses soaring blissfully high
Yes,my love must have wings to fly
Sing songs of love,that I may hear
Telling me , taunting me ,taking me there


Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.

So Tattoo my Soul with your poet's pen
Perhaps I'll want to love again.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Oh, I deleted one of my reviews and they both disappeared. Soo sorry.

I know I recall writing that this is absolutely wonderful. There's not a word of criticism I could give.

The metre is fine, the phrases beautifull created, the verses flow...

'Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.'

And as for : 'Tattoo my soul with your poet's pen,; that is what words, the perfect words can do, etch a permanent mark for always.

Thank you, thank you for sharing such a great piece of writing.

[James Harding]

I love the way you write, it seems to flow right off the page and sounds best read aloud. I particularly liked the line "reaping romance of rhymes you write." :) Definitly a great poem.

[Texas]

I want to steal your muse. This piece is lovely. It has a simple elegance to it. Flows so perfectly. Can I steal your muse? :) Beautifully done.

[Magdelena]

Just beautiful my friend. Congrats on a exceptional piece so deserving of the win..
Sighhh. Tis beautiful...

Mags xx

[Marie Anzalone]

I love the imagery of tattooing one's soul- a permanent image. If we could see, I bet many of us might have an absolute gallery of masterpieces of spiritual ink left behind by those who made an indelible mark. Some are wolves, snarling and scary, some goblins, and others- roses. Clouds. Angels. What an intriguing request.

[deeps]

Fran, This is so amazing!
I like this alot. Very well written as well.

[MagiCrystal]

Fill my heart with your poet's ink,
A cupid's cup of which I'll drink.
Reaping romance of rhymes you write
Gleefully glandes with gay delight.


Now can I tattoo this in my soul desire?
Masterpiece

[Deeksha]

Amazing! Loved it! :)

Good luck in my contest! :)

[Bertie]

This is beautiful, also quite haunting.
It's like a what a modern shakespeare would write :)
Well done, very well done !