Tattoo My Soul

Tattoo My Soul         

Tattoo my soul with your poet's pen,
Perchance I'll want to live again.
Say sounds so softly with each line,
Whispering words of love,
Making them Mine.

Fill my heart with your poet's ink,
A cupid's cup of which I'll drink.
Reaping romance of rhymes you write
Gleefully gladens with gay delight.

Send my senses soaring blissfully high
Yes,my love must have wings to fly
Sing songs of love,that I may hear
Telling me , taunting me ,taking me there


Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.

So Tattoo my Soul with your poet's pen
Perhaps I'll want to love again.

Reviews

[emmajoy]

Oh, I deleted one of my reviews and they both disappeared. Soo sorry.

I know I recall writing that this is absolutely wonderful. There's not a word of criticism I could give.

The metre is fine, the phrases beautifull created, the verses flow...

'Mark my mind with your poet's thought,
Awaken my spirit in vapors caught.
Renew and refine that I may have and see
Poetry's Picturesque Paint on me.'

And as for : 'Tattoo my soul with your poet's pen,; that is what words, the perfect words can do, etch a permanent mark for always.

Thank you, thank you for sharing such a great piece of writing.

[Sara Muschweck]

Wonderful write, such eloquence and imagery. I love how the ink of the poets pen can be as lasting as the ink of a tattoo. Well done.

[~crazy Beautiful~]

I love this one
All of my tattoos have meaning, this piece runs deeper than that, I traveled through the depths of your soul in this one, thank you
the last two lines make the poem.
thank you for entering my contest

[Brianna Brie]

Ever so romantic and the message is alluring. The whisper of a poet's pen sure and swift meant to drift me into another's world. Lovely!!