vaguely familiar

vaguely familiar

A Poem by Fran Marie

taken aback by
a potpourri of deja vu..
an aphrodisiac of jasmine
and sensual scents

yes, oh yes

I've been here before.

wrapped up in your warmth

feeling your touch..tasting desire.. and
so much more

we laughed,loved
and danced beneath moonlight
with each kiss of bliss connecting the stars
perfecting our love

all this ever so

vaguely familiar

yes, oh yes
I've been here before

and here we are again










© 2019 Fran Marie


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This conjured up such a delightful air of romance and pleasure - and the key phrase 'a potpourri of deja vu' showed a perceptive understanding that sometimes we go through the pleasures of 'jasmine and sensual scents' while at the same time feeling it is a kind of ritual.

The trailing structure supported this feeling of detached reflection.. and I wanted to go there again.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks Jibey..so much appreciate your kind comments on my poem



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I wish I could write something as simply authentically touching as this. Nothing you express is complex or done with high word crafting, but the enthusiasm flows thru to bring your whole message alive . . . "potpourri of deja vu" is my favorite phrase of the week. This is the kind of phrase that keeps on giving! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Awhh..glad you enjoyed my potpourri of deja vu phrase..I always enjoy your great reviews. Thanks Mar.. read more
This conjured up such a delightful air of romance and pleasure - and the key phrase 'a potpourri of deja vu' showed a perceptive understanding that sometimes we go through the pleasures of 'jasmine and sensual scents' while at the same time feeling it is a kind of ritual.

The trailing structure supported this feeling of detached reflection.. and I wanted to go there again.

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks Jibey..so much appreciate your kind comments on my poem
The below lines could stand alone dear Fran.
"we laughed,loved
and danced beneath moonlight
with each kiss of bliss connecting the stars
perfecting our love"
I do love the above lines. Love need laughter. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry,
Coyote

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks John..for reading ..much appreciate. your comments on my poem;
Great lead into the sensual togetherness you so well describe Fran - and with metaphors to sigh for - a nostalgic feel to the poem took me back moons ago.......... loved every line of this deja-vu............. Fay

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


  Fran Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks Fay ever so much..I appreciate. your your review on my poetry;
such a lovely write here, your words are beautiful

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Many thanks kitseth..I so appreciate

What a lucky pair you are and beautifully captured moments such as these are a rare delight and a real treat........... Neville

Posted 2 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

2 Weeks Ago

Thanks Neville ever so much..appreciate your words on my poetry;
Neville Pettitt

2 Weeks Ago

a pleasure always.... and mine too which makes it even better..
What a lovely deja vu..

‘with each kiss of bliss connecting the stars
perfecting our love’...these kisses are rare and can never be forgotten

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

3 Weeks Ago

Many thanks wondering mind..glad you stopped by to read..ever so much appreciate..
i like the title...and the sensuality of the poem...but the imagery is far from vague...the memories high definition...and when it seems we have been here before...oh, wow, yes, we have been.
got caught up in this one...remembered a certain person reading this...made me smile to think of her.
j.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks Jacob..so very much for your kind words. and thoughts on my poem..so appreciate
Scents can really stimulate memories. Can evoke the emotions and make one reflect on past experiences. I like where your sensual lines took me Fran Marie. Took me down pathways I had visited before.

Chris

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks Chris..so much appreciate your kind review..I so appreciate..
A very sensually romantic freeverse that begins with a lovley stanza filled with palpable aromas and takes us through the emotions of one dedicated to the physical and psychological union with a lover.

Posted 3 Weeks Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Weeks Ago

Thanks John..ever so much appreciate your words on my poetry..

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Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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