If you were mine

If you were mine

A Poem by Fran Marie
"

"

I would say to you my love....

How

do I

love

thee"





Let

me not count

the ways

for surely

it would take




Eternity



I would say

I'd give

you

the stars

and moon too



that's how

much...

I love


you

Ii you were mine









© 2020 Fran Marie


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I missed this little gem, and it is a beauty. Very nicely penned and how it touches the heart Fran Marie.

Chris



Posted 1 Month Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

Thank you Christine
so very much for reading
glad you enjoyed;
Oh how I can't do love on the page:( I still can't even define it properly... perhaps I am part vulcan to many years of that stiff upper lip being beaten into me:? This form and flow of this is however quite lovely dear Fran Marie:)

Posted 1 Month Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

Thanks dear Robert; I
bet you can do love.lol
you don't look like Mr.Spock.
Unrequited love is one of the most reliable sources of poetic inspiration... I very much hope that you will be able to speak the words to them!!!

Adix

Posted 1 Month Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

yes i t is..thank you so very much
For reviewing..;
adichie

1 Month Ago

My pleasure.
nothing like Lassoing the Moon for a special someone...a galaxy of love which is so immense...
really like the layout, theme, and conciseness of this piece.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

thanks dear Jacob
I t's a wonderful life"
when you can lasso the moon ;
Fran, I love the simplicity and sincerity in this poem. And, the format works well here. A well-time poem for the approaching Valentine's Day. :)

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

thanks dear Robert..
glad you e
  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

glad you enjoyed..my phone went out
I will give you the stars and the moon. That what love should be. Thank you dear Fran for sharing the wonderful poem for love.
Coyote

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

thanks dear John..I agree
It should be all that and more
Coyote Poetry

1 Month Ago

You are welcome dear Fran.

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  Fran Marie
Fran Marie

Paris, KY



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