If you were mine

I would say to you my love....

How

do I

love

thee"





Let

me not count

the ways

for surely

it would take




Eternity



I would say

I'd give

you

the stars

and moon too



that's how

much...

I love


you

Ii you were mine

Reviews

[Patricia Wedel]

dear Fran... Valentines through the years bear
the words "Be Mine"... the sweetest sip of Wine
for your Sweetheart. May your Cup overflow with Love
a Year later... but even more lovable. tenderly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Pat
my cup 0 plenty
runneth over
I'm am blessed
feeling well in
spite of this covid.
pandemic.i
appreciate your
lovely words; 💓

[Einstein Noodle]

to the moon and back eh!? i like the form .. it gives me the impression of a kind of purity .. words are a premium when sparse in a sea of white. I especially like how you have given "Eternity" a place of emphasis with just a touch of more space and an upper case "E" ... a fine Valentine's poem .. one I would wish were written for me ;) ... ahhhhhhhh its a day for romance isn't it Fran.
Peace Sister,
E.

[Fran Marie]

thanks s o much
E yes a day for
a rosy romance
sweethearts and
candy; I appreciate
your kind words;

[Gee]

A beautiful verse for Valentine's day Fran Marie
Hope you are well

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Gee
for reviewing
doing well here
wishing you the same😊

[Chris Shaw]

I missed this little gem, and it is a beauty. Very nicely penned and how it touches the heart Fran Marie.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thank you Christine
so very much for reading
glad you enjoyed;

[Robert Trakofler]

Oh how I can't do love on the page:( I still can't even define it properly... perhaps I am part vulcan to many years of that stiff upper lip being beaten into me:? This form and flow of this is however quite lovely dear Fran Marie:)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Robert; I
bet you can do love.lol
you don't look like Mr.Spock.

[adichie]

Unrequited love is one of the most reliable sources of poetic inspiration... I very much hope that you will be able to speak the words to them!!!

Adix

[Fran Marie]

yes i t is..thank you so very much
For reviewing..;

[adichie]

My pleasure.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

nothing like Lassoing the Moon for a special someone...a galaxy of love which is so immense...
really like the layout, theme, and conciseness of this piece.
j.

[Fran Marie]

thanks dear Jacob
I t's a wonderful life"
when you can lasso the moon ;

[R.E. Ray]

Fran, I love the simplicity and sincerity in this poem. And, the format works well here. A well-time poem for the approaching Valentine's Day. :)

[Fran Marie]

thanks dear Robert..
glad you e

[Fran Marie]

glad you enjoyed..my phone went out

[Coyote Poetry]

I will give you the stars and the moon. That what love should be. Thank you dear Fran for sharing the wonderful poem for love.
Coyote

[Fran Marie]

thanks dear John..I agree
It should be all that and more

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome dear Fran.