See you in My Dreams Babe

See you in My Dreams Babe

A Poem by Fran Marie

I'll see you in my dreams
speaking softly the right
words of comfort
cradle you in my arms
as if there were no tomorrow..yet holding
on to forever

and everything we miss
in daylight's dim reality
we can fulfill with evening's dream delight
a dreamscape of bliss
 will be given with each
kiss to your sweet lips
leaving no desire undone

take these things I
now offer..accept the
gift of love I give
it's yours ..for time
is fleeing from our grasp
yet we have tonight.. until dawn breaks
I'll see you in my dreams babe

© 2020 Fran Marie


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Some people hit the jackpot & end up with a lifelong mate that's still pleasing after all these years. The rest of us are like this poem, recycling that one promising interlude that fuels all our subsequent imaginings. I hate to admit it, but I've gotten so old & lazy, I'd rather live an easy-peasy fantasy life like in your poem, than to deal with a crotchety human being in the flesh by my side! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

so true dear Margie
thanks for your kind
review..i so appreciate;
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wonderful thoughts of love

Posted 4 Weeks Ago


This is about the more pleasurable avenues of touch. I thinks anyway.


Most people are terrible at writing about desires of the flesh. It's either on the nose or too vague. You found a middle ground. At least, in my imagination you did.

Posted 1 Month Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

thanks Dave;
ever s o much
I appreciate your
words on this one,
This one holds so much intent and heart.

Posted 1 Month Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

Thanks Chris
for your words
I so appreciate;
Chris

1 Month Ago

They were quite true...
Oh Fran this is truly beautiful from the first line you pulled me in and the yearning, fearless honesty of the lines that followed melted my heart:) This was such lovely poetry I have to say this is an instant favorite I love every line:)!!!!!

Posted 1 Month Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

thanks Robert.
ever so much
glad you enjoyed
this one..hope
you are do.. read more
This lovely poem was like tasting hot steamy chocolate on a cold night. It warmed me Fran and I was more than thankful for that. Keep safe and keep well.

Chris

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

Thanks Chris..ever
a o much..glad you
liked it..stay safe during
these cooped-u.. read more
dearest Fran... an endearing poem for a
love that knows no end in a Universe where Spirits
appear in dreams of once there was you and me...
where kisses were given freely and hearts were held closely.
A song without end... an eternity. truly, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

It will be nice
to have contact
again in reality
and not just in
dreams... read more
How tenderly beautiful and touching. This was like a taste of hot cocoa on a cold winter's evening, comforting, warm and sweet. I greatly enjoyed!

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

Thanks dear Fabian
hot cocoa always sounds
good; warm and cozy for sure
I appre.. read more
Some people hit the jackpot & end up with a lifelong mate that's still pleasing after all these years. The rest of us are like this poem, recycling that one promising interlude that fuels all our subsequent imaginings. I hate to admit it, but I've gotten so old & lazy, I'd rather live an easy-peasy fantasy life like in your poem, than to deal with a crotchety human being in the flesh by my side! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

so true dear Margie
thanks for your kind
review..i so appreciate;
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
in dreams we can touch, even if in daylight, waking hours, distance is the proverbial word of the moment.
We reach out for each other in our imagination...
lovely and timely piece of writing.
j.

Posted 1 Month Ago


2 of 2 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

thanks Jacob ..yes
in dreams we can do
whatever pleases us
to our hearts deligh.. read more

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Fran Marie

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