See you in My Dreams Babe

I'll see you in my dreams

speaking softly the right

words of comfort

cradle you in my arms

as if there were no tomorrow..yet holding

on to forever

and everything we miss

in daylight's dim reality

we can fulfill with evening's dream delight

a dreamscape of bliss

 will be given with each

kiss to your sweet lips

leaving no desire undone

take these things I

now offer..accept the

gift of love I give

it's yours ..for time

is fleeing from our grasp

yet we have tonight.. until dawn breaks

I'll see you in my dreams babe

Reviews

[barleygirl]

Some people hit the jackpot & end up with a lifelong mate that's still pleasing after all these years. The rest of us are like this poem, recycling that one promising interlude that fuels all our subsequent imaginings. I hate to admit it, but I've gotten so old & lazy, I'd rather live an easy-peasy fantasy life like in your poem, than to deal with a crotchety human being in the flesh by my side! *wink! wink!* Fondly, Margie

[Fran Marie]

so true dear Margie
thanks for your kind
review..i so appreciate;

[Kathy Van Kurin]

'See you in My Dreams Babe'
This kind of writing never gets old. We all enjoy it, to be reminded of the importance of close relationships.From a first kiss to a lifelong dream and commitment together. This poem sings the right song. Well done and as you say in last stanza;
'take these things i
now offer accept the
gift of love I give
it's yours..for time
is fleeing from our grasp
yet we have tonight..until dawn breaks
I'll see you in my dreams babe.'
Even if the hope of love is just in one's dreams.
Kathy

[Fran Marie]

thanks dear kathy
true..we can always
dream
s o appreciate
your reviews.;

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Take care Fran Marie, I hope your are enjoying this beautiful early summer and finding time to be outside. So good for our health.

[Fran Marie]

thanks dear friend
you too..enjoy today
I'm soaking up this
lovely outdoor
read morethanks dear friend
you too..enjoy today
I'm soaking up this
lovely outdoor
catching some
sun rays
Happy 4th 2020

[Kathy Van Kurin]

OK Fran Marie, Bye bye for now. See you next time.

[wordman]

wonderful thoughts of love

[Davidgeo]

This is about the more pleasurable avenues of touch. I thinks anyway.


Most people are terrible at writing about desires of the flesh. It's either on the nose or too vague. You found a middle ground. At least, in my imagination you did.

[Fran Marie]

thanks Dave;
ever s o much
I appreciate your
words on this one,

[Chris]

This one holds so much intent and heart.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris
for your words
I so appreciate;

[Chris]

They were quite true...

[Robert Trakofler]

Oh Fran this is truly beautiful from the first line you pulled me in and the yearning, fearless honesty of the lines that followed melted my heart:) This was such lovely poetry I have to say this is an instant favorite I love every line:)!!!!!

[Fran Marie]

thanks Robert.
ever so much
glad you enjoyed
this one..hope
you are doing
well..stay safe

[Chris Shaw]

This lovely poem was like tasting hot steamy chocolate on a cold night. It warmed me Fran and I was more than thankful for that. Keep safe and keep well.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Chris..ever
a o much..glad you
liked it..stay safe during
these cooped-up days
hopefully this will end
at some point

[Patricia Wedel]

dearest Fran... an endearing poem for a
love that knows no end in a Universe where Spirits
appear in dreams of once there was you and me...
where kisses were given freely and hearts were held closely.
A song without end... an eternity. truly, Pat

[Fran Marie]

It will be nice
to have contact
again in reality
and not just in
dreams..
thanks dear pat
I appreciate your
words;

[Fabian G. Franklin]

How tenderly beautiful and touching. This was like a taste of hot cocoa on a cold winter's evening, comforting, warm and sweet. I greatly enjoyed!

[Fran Marie]

Thanks dear Fabian
hot cocoa always sounds
good; warm and cozy for sure
I appreciate your kind words
stay safe;

[jacob erin-cilberto]

in dreams we can touch, even if in daylight, waking hours, distance is the proverbial word of the moment.
We reach out for each other in our imagination...
lovely and timely piece of writing.
j.

[Fran Marie]

thanks Jacob ..yes
in dreams we can do
whatever pleases us
to our hearts delight