Hey you

I love your little imperfections

the way you don't

cross you Ts

and then swing those 

off centered dots

on your little I s

spilling your earl grey

tea because your eyes

 are glued to the morning 

news paper ..darting back and forth

 like watching a tennis match.

.trying not to miss the small print

hey you

I love your little perfections

the way you

you see me 

love me ..

everyday

in everyway...

loving my little

imperfections..

your gentle touch

affection ..caring

so much.even when

our journey proves

rough and the road

we travel loses a tad 

more color

and we both lost

our rose colored glasses

along the way

But.. hey you

you're the one that remains true to my

heart..

we're so imperfectly

perfect for each other

because we're as one

synchronized beat 

in time.

Reviews

[Robert Trakofler]

I pray to god and all that's holy that you never ever lose that wonderful feeling dear Fran! what a wonderful thing you just penned and it breathes so very honest to my ear in the lines unfolding beautiful beautiful beautiful poetry:) I must get back to work so this is a great way to exit my reading for the day:)

[Fran Marie]

Thank you 'thank you' thank you!
dear Robert..have a great day..;

[Gayathri]

Great...You could completely love a person only when u love their imperfections too. Loved the list.the spontaneity is nice.

[Fran Marie]

Thanks so
vey much
for your words
on my poetry
I s o appreciate😀

[CC]

What a sweet poem! Not overdone. Honest.

I'm in love with the "hey you" refrain -- all the gentle adoration without the eye roll factor of a "babe, honey, dear, sweetie" etc.

Thank you for your words!

[Fran Marie]

thanks CC .i
see what you
mean..i must
admit though
I use those sweeties
honeys and babes also
I s o appreciate your
review;

[Gee]

And there is the recipe for a long term relationship, acceptance, understanding and a wanting to be with.
Really liked this. Tis me and my wife to a tee :))
Hope you are well Fran Marie

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Gee
sorry to be
s o late in
with my reply
I do appreciate;

[barleygirl]

In my experience of longterm relationships around me (I haven't had one), I find that people nitpick in the worst ways about the dumbest stuff. That's why your poem seems to be the antidote to this human frailty, as you draw a word picture of how it looks when a person doesn't just ACCEPT your shortcomings, but actually ENJOYS them! This is what we all crave in a friend or lover (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

[John Fitzgerald]

This has a lovely, gentle undercurrent. So sentimental and romantic, with so many subtle gestures of love well expressed. I particularly liked the emphasis of the fading of the rose tinted glasses and yet the love remains. True love left intact beyond the scars of time. Well done

[Fran Marie]

thanks John
for your thoughts
and words on this
I s o appreciate;

[James Paranormal]

This is the classic romance, that I miss in romantics, thank you for bringing back the nostalgia, Soft, and beautiful, flowing tapestry of poetic passion :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Mike
so vey much
for Reading an
Reviewing
I s o appreciate

[Tomás Ó C..]

Such is true love, not the kind of novels and films, but of real life and a life lived together...

[Fran Marie]

s o true.
thanks Tom
I appreciate the
visit dear friend
hope you are read mores o true.
thanks Tom
I appreciate the
visit dear friend
hope you are
doing well

[Fabian G. Franklin]

What a lovely offering to read. The beauty of love portrayed as more than Valentine hearts and chubby cherubs shooting arrows and blowing kisses. Young love might think it's full of fire and passion but there's nothing so hot as the bed of embers after the flames die away. Young love might think it's full of passion but it's really full of uncertainty and fear. While older love is like fine wine, getting better all the time or a comfortable pair of jeans that can't be replaced, no matter how threadbare they may seem. Older love has comfort and security and peace and a love of the familiar. Many's the time I would have traded all the Yankee Know-How in my lovers for a bit of Southern comfort. But living with your best friend and soul mate and sharing your name and life with them has to be the best. I know it is for me. :)

[Fran Marie]

Thanks Fabian
for your thoughts
and insightful review
finding your soulmate read moreThanks Fabian
for your thoughts
and insightful review
finding your soulmate
is the ultimate joy
of living..i appreciate
your words;

[Chris Shaw]

This is a love poem. One with a difference because it's not slushy, mushy love. It's real love which takes on board the imperfections as well as the good points. It's love that comes over time and experience of being together and knowing each other so well. I loved this poem Fran Marie. It's my cuppa tea.

Chris

[Fran Marie]

I'll drink to that
Tea that is :)
no slushy mushy
stuff here ..haha
thanks Chris I do
appreciate;😊

[Unspoken poet]

aww, this is such a wonderful sweet write. Nicely written and expressed

[Fran Marie]

thanks Chosen K
glad you liked it😊