April

Haiku set

 

 

 

A month of surprise
burst of colors so intense
awakes ev'ry sense

endowed lofty trees
sway to a softly light breeze
season's recompence

winter's bid adieu
April sprang grand and brand new
wet blades of grass dance 

Reviews

[Shalini Dinesh (Poet's ..]

short and good spring poem, congrats on winning the contest...

[Tina Kline]

I like this, it's a really fun spring poem.

[happy girl]

That was really nice, good job!

[Stella]

Nice haiku! A beautiful description of spring. :)

[Kara Emily Krantz]

aw i want to try a haiku set! that's really cool - and i love the tribute to april and the goodbyeeee to winter! :)

'season's recompence"

what a fantastic line - and such a great word choice.
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This is beautiful. I think you captured what April is all about. It also happens to be my favorite month. Nice writing!

[Emily B]

This is lovely.

[Genie]

Season's recompence indeed -- nicely done, Fran! Helps me to know there's spring at the end of mud season, somewhere at least!