it's all you left me

it's all you left me

A Poem by Fran Marie

black orchards and rain

 cold flower drenched in love's pain

I'd do it again

© 2020 Fran Marie


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Your well-chosen images remind me of some savagely good times that burnt out fast. The power of your message resonates further as we imagine being so defiant toward pain that we'd do it again (whereas many retreat to their caution places to avoid further heartbreak). A few short lines that DELIVER! (((HUGS))) Fondly, Margie

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

thanks Margie
exactly I hear
what you're saying
those burnt out days
ki.. read more
barleygirl

4 Months Ago

Love your John M. reference! Perfect!



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Amazing use of words dear Fran. You said everything needed in the few words written. I would do the deadly and wild dance once again. Thank you dear friend for sharing the outstanding poetry. I liked this one.
Coyote

Posted 3 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

3 Months Ago

yes, the deadly
and wild dance;
Thanks John
for your kind
words;
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Coyote Poetry

3 Months Ago

Hello dear Fran and you are welcome.
dearest Fran... as feathery feelings fly into
clouds of Pomegranates where taste buds linger...
I surrender until storms tether on tender moments.
gently, Pat


Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

Thanks Pat
for your lovely
poetic reviews
alwsys appreciate
your thought.. read more
Few lines yet impactful. Message of falling in love unconditionally knowing about the cold breeze is something daring. Nicely penned poem I must say. Have a wonderful day ahead :)

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

Thanks Vari
ever so much
I appreciate
your kind words:)
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Yes, love is always worth fighting for even if we lose it all in the end. I like the courage that your final line contains; many others would prefer to hide behind a wall of heartbreak and never venture forth again, but not this poetess, and that is an attitude to be admired. Lovely senryu, Fran. 💛

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

thanks Marina
for the kind
review, love
is always
worth another
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This proves a poem can be better than a painting, that reading can be as good as seeing, that it doesn't take a thousand words to paint a picture. This had so much in few words. Amazing! Tyfs

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

thanks cyprian
for the lovely
review on my
poem I see
what you're
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love makes us all chasing on something/someone and then leaving 'em all accordingly w/ time, though best part of it relies on - how we live throu' what we are given w/ in time.

interesting.. & quite an artistry of yours i see in words.

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

thanks Wordsmith
for your kind review
I suppose that
time does play a part
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There's much beauty in the place where your words took me. The imagery is striking too. And the conclusion is spirited and so powerful. Looking back at heartbreak, in retrospect, one is indeed grateful for the pain and dark rain that only took us towards light!

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

thanks AJ
s o true
sometimes we
need to feel the
dark rain to
ap.. read more
AJNJ

4 Months Ago

Indeed, we need the rain....
You're most welcome, Ms. Fran!
That's the heartbreak of love when it goes pear shaped. So much depth of feeling here Fran Marie. Ouch I can feel the hurt. However, I'd do it again too if it was good while it lasted. Well done my friend.


Chris

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

thanks dear Chris
for your kind words
I always appreciate
your reviews m y frie.. read more
It's so amazing.... So less of words but so vivid the description of pain.... Just awesome

Posted 4 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

thanks Dreamer
I so appreciate
your kind words
on m y poetry;


must have been damned good .......... enough said ..
... exceptionally well writ Fran and muchly enjoyed ..

Neville

Posted 4 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Neville

4 Months Ago

I just knew it... that’s a fellas intuition for ya see 👍😎🍷
  Fran Marie

4 Months Ago

right you are Nev (*-*)
Neville

4 Months Ago


~~~~~~~~~~~~~ 👍 🍷 cheers m'dear :)

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