We're better together

We're better together

A Poem by Fran Marie

 do we need approval
 from anyone of our love?  
 it can't be far off the mark
 we're just two lovers 
In love's sweet embrace 
as one spirit In the dark 

the world doesn't exist
I care not what they think 
we can't be weighed down
when we fill each other's bliss
and from cupid's cup we drink

when you know it's
just we two
free to follow a future bright
our soul mate bond so true
sublime entry into the light? 

and if we choose forever
intense lovers are you and me
eternity sings were better together
'tis a love which was meant to be

© 2020 Fran Marie


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Sun in other's day, the wind in other's sky, the waves in other's ocean and the beat in other's heart... Thinking of each other! Pair of lovers is a pair of eyes that never tired of looking at each other, lyrics to each other, closing each other, in the light and dark and two books, writing and reading each other, without ever interchanging the pages. Gives me lots of emotions flooding in thoughts. Enjoyable and lovely poem :) made me think of someone simply a masterpiece Marie :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

7 Months Ago

Thanks Vari
for the grand
review on my
poetry ..yes
two lovers
l.. read more
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What matters is if the two consenting adults are happy. No one else is in the relationship with them so it should not matter what others think nir should people try to put their nose in where it doesn’t belong

Posted 1 Month Ago


Very good imagery can’t wait some more of your writing

Posted 1 Month Ago


  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

thanks Lauren;
s o much appreciated;
dearest Fran... the Stars fall when lovers embrace... Flowers dance and birds romance with songs of sunny bursts of vibrations... May it always be so.
tenderly, Pat

Posted 1 Month Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

1 Month Ago

yes; may it always
be so..thanks
dear Pat; I
always appreciate
your kin.. read more
No approval is ever needed, and even more so almost never heeded!!!! Lol...we manage singular focus when it comes to love, when nothing else in our life can garner that much attention. Great writing and great questions!

Posted 6 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

6 Months Ago

Thanks Crowley
s o very true
I appreciate
your kind review;
Lovely to bask in love's glow, knowing it will outlast these transient bodies.

Posted 6 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

6 Months Ago

Thanks Val
s o much
appreciated;
VALORMORE DE PLUME

6 Months Ago

Blessings to you Fran.
Love is such a beautiful bond of choice between two people. Its a pact and a contract written in hearts. Binds yet frees. Abiding always.

Posted 7 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

7 Months Ago

Thanks Chat a
so much appreciate
the kind review;
Dhara_Ditzy Kat

7 Months Ago

My pleasure dear Fran!
I believe Donne wrote. "Love find us, we do not find love." Hello dear Fran and I loved the complete poem.
"and if we choose forever
intense lovers are you and me
eternity sings were better together
'tis a love which was meant to be"
I agree with the above lines. When love find us. No sweeter place to taste. Thank you for sharing the outstanding poetry for love.
Coyote


Posted 7 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

7 Months Ago

Thanks John
love does find
us ..so true
I appreciate
your kind words read more
Coyote Poetry

6 Months Ago

I love your work and you are welcome dear Fran.
You had me thinking of Romeo and Juliet here, Fran....that kind of fiery, passionate love that matters more than anything else in the world.....and those that don't agree with it, be damned. When you find the right person to share love with this is the way it feels. Just two against the world. It's a wonderful place to be in emotionally and your poem, written in it's lovely, rhythmic, flowing style does justice to such love. A beautiful poem. 💛

Posted 7 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

7 Months Ago

thanks Marina
so much for
your kind review
on m y poetry
I so appreciate.. read more
Sun in other's day, the wind in other's sky, the waves in other's ocean and the beat in other's heart... Thinking of each other! Pair of lovers is a pair of eyes that never tired of looking at each other, lyrics to each other, closing each other, in the light and dark and two books, writing and reading each other, without ever interchanging the pages. Gives me lots of emotions flooding in thoughts. Enjoyable and lovely poem :) made me think of someone simply a masterpiece Marie :)

Posted 7 Months Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

  Fran Marie

7 Months Ago

Thanks Vari
for the grand
review on my
poetry ..yes
two lovers
l.. read more
This comment has been deleted by the poster.
Beautifully written, I smiled all the way through and bugger at the end. I agree with Ankita. I also really like the rhyming as well as the golden meaning behind the words. Wonderfully explained and expressed, Fran. tyfs

Posted 7 Months Ago


  Fran Marie

7 Months Ago

Thanks Cyprian
s o very much
appreciated;

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